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Rozen_spark


I'm not much for writing but reading fan fics here makes me want to try

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After being sent to ponyville to check on the harmony festival, Sunset Shimmer will meet five important mares who represent the elements of harmony.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Might need to doc the italics up a bit. Second half was tilted. If you need an editor. Let me know. Definitely needs work. Otherwise it looks good.

4943348 I could use an editor, would you like to be the editor?

I like the idea, but the execution needs a bit more work.

4946725

How it's written.

the flow, descriptions, etc etc.

One question...Why Sweetie Drops over Bonbon?:rainbowhuh:

5268504 I like her original name

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