After being sent to ponyville to check on the harmony festival, Sunset Shimmer will meet five important mares who represent the elements of harmony.
I'm not much for writing but reading fan fics here makes me want to try
After being sent to ponyville to check on the harmony festival, Sunset Shimmer will meet five important mares who represent the elements of harmony.
Might need to doc the italics up a bit. Second half was tilted. If you need an editor. Let me know. Definitely needs work. Otherwise it looks good.
4943348 I could use an editor, would you like to be the editor?
I like the idea, but the execution needs a bit more work.
4946591 execution?
4946725
How it's written.
the flow, descriptions, etc etc.
4946740 ah okay
One question...Why Sweetie Drops over Bonbon?
5268504 I like her original name