A strange occurrence happened...a portal to another world! But when Lightning Blaze goes to investigate, it sucks him in. Will he get back to Equestria? Will he get back to his friends? Or will he be stuck in the alternet world forever?
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no just kiding but you should make more chapters
Interesting idea, but try to elaborate on what's going on some more. Some of the prose was a little confusing to keep up with, but that might be from my own idiocy.
I feel like it's still too early to judge on the quality here, but it's looking pretty okay so far.
Sorry for the long wait everyone, things got in the way of me writing (including the accidental deletion of my files), so I had to start over chapter 3 from scratch. Never did like the original idea for the chapter, anyway.
Please stay in wait for the oncoming chapter, and thank you for your cooperation.
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