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Nothing ever seemed to go right for Buzzkill. She would always have something in her life that would screw her over. She never had many friends, and was more timid and quiet to talk to anypony. Until one day when Buzzkill runs away from home and meets a mare who she believes can fulfill her greatest want.

This story will be told in the first person point of view.

All edits and corrections are made by this kind lady ---> http://www.fimfiction.net/user/snowflakes+in+the+snow

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

This story is pretty heartwarming. My only complaint is the grammar. I would be happy to edit it for you, though!

4890871 That would be great! But you won't change anything will you? This story is one of my best ones so you won't change things like the plot right?

4890940

No, No, no, not at all! It'll just be grammar and the phrasing in some sentences. I'll PM you the edit tomorrow at some point.

4890947 Well alright then! Do I need to do anything like give you a password or something? This is the first time I'm entrusting somebody to fix my work.

4890988

Nope! It'd be easier for you if I just message it to you.

4890998 Well alrighty then! Glad you enjoyed the story!

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Oh, I'm also talking British time, so it could be a little late for you. If I tell you that it's 23:22 for me now, then you can do the maths.

This was really cute! :twilightsmile: I hope you make more heartwarming stories like this! :pinkiesmile:
Lyra was kind of an ass though.

5028197 I'm working on some right now my friend, and once my editor is finished with the editing I'll upload it. But of course it will have one of my many OCs but his love interest will be someone from the show, here's a little hint on who it might be. :trixieshiftleft:

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