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Unleash the Beast

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Princess Luna just wants to remember, for immortals treasure their memories and the castle in the Everfree is just one memory she can't lose, no matter the cost.

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Evilhumour

Evilhumour #1 · Aug 21st, 2014 · 2 · ·

Hmmmm

CWA

CWA #2 · Aug 21st, 2014 · 1 · ·

Thrilling. :o Do Continue!

TwelveFoot

TwelveFoot #3 · Aug 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

You get bonus points for nicknaming Celestial something other than Tia.

Vaughn

Vaughn #4 · Aug 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

You wouldn't DARE kill Luna!

Starfall13

Starfall13 #5 · Aug 23rd, 2014 · · ·

4895133 You'll just have to keep reading to find out.

Vaughn

Vaughn #6 · Aug 23rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4895195 suspense!!!

Silver Flare

Silver Flare #7 · Sep 13th, 2015 · · ·

Get yourself an editor, mate! Is my hearty advice. The errors you have are not obvious, to my mind, but more in the way of missing words and tense/grammatical issues. An editor would help a lot.

That being said, this story has a great deal of promise, and I like the way you develop Luna through memories. I'm deeply curious as to where you are taking the plot. Please, do go on.