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lunasroyalguard4life3


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The story is about a stallion who after a tragic moment happens and he explains his slow decent into madness and going to his insane state of mind
Story includes
Gore
Insanity
4th wall breaking

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 26 )

i want ANOTHER!!!!!!! ps that means MOAR!!!!!

val

I dont think the 4th wall breaking is needed

4872970 Ok I will do more I`m going on a limb and going to say you enjoyed the story:twilightsmile:
4873738 Its always neded:pinkiehappy:

I know this is going to be weird but I would like it if people left comments after reading a chapter if you are confused by anything, I also just want to have conversation with people about whatever or something they would like to see in the book I could try and put it in there thank you for reading this and have a good day

val

will you add his wife dieing to pinkie pie and fluttershy, after they torture her?

4876871 So are you asking me to explain the torture his wife endured or that his family was killed by pinkie and flutters or are you asking both

AH who diliked it:pinkiesad2:who ever disliked it thanks I thought this was getting to many likes:unsuresweetie:but I would like to know why you did`t like it so I can know how to better myself

val

4877211 ok scrap adding fluttershy in
during a dream he has pinkie pie physically torturing his wife
after the welcome to ponyville party she gives everyone

4887808 Ok I see were you r getting at but I did it like that 4 a reason that will b said later in the story:pinkiehappy:ok

val

4890116 I don't understand what you're saying

val

4892405 wait I think I get it now she will be tortured but for a different reason

val

4892664 I thought we were talking about his wife being tortured :pinkiecrazy:
since when were we talking about bingo :rainbowhuh::fluttercry::rainbowhuh:

4893172 We are always talking about Bingo:pinkiecrazy:and the eating of flesh sweet delious flesh we also talk about our friends who seem to have vanished into the darkness that live in the mind and soul that threshes at its cage to be let out and stomp on our sanity:pinkiehappy:and wait whats all of this oh well and there might be a new chapter tomorrow not sure though I will try:twilightsmile:

val

4893305 a chapter tommorow sounds nice

Ok peoples I dont wont to disapoint you so I will try and write a chapter through the xbox its going to be the worst written chapter but I want to at least try to get something out before I go back to my fathers on the 1st weekend of september so here I go

Comment posted by val deleted Aug 24th, 2014

4898081 yep:pinkiecrazy:I hope you enjoyed it because that dumbass of a author is dead and I dont think you are going 2 like how I did it:pinkiecrazy:

val

4901035 the author is gone and now we can get along with our plans to tak-k-kkkk-e o:pinkiecrazy:ver the world

4901178 but I would help Im the bucking mane character in the god dam story I just killed the author because he kept beeping my swears out:pinkiecrazy:dont worry the show will go on but how I want it to:pinkiecrazy:

val

4901845 I will wait till you have finished your story.
I have waited many years for someone to help me
I can wait longer

val

More and more waiting to have someone help me with world domination
ALSO WHAT GAVE YOU THE IDEA THAT I AM FEMALE?

5208208 No clue just thought you were my apologies and sorry Im not fit enough to help take over

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