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A Fluttermac Love Story. Big Mac shares his feelings with Fluttershy the day Fluttershy was going to share her feelings with Big Mac. As these two fall in love. They make love. Fluttershy Wakes up at Sweet Apple acres... Find out more in the first Chapter!
I will not take any picture credit as it is not mine. But you can make a cover for me if you want.
Wishing there was a category tag that will say "Shipping" Pretty soon.
Eminem-Space Bound Great song, don't see how it was at 40 on the charts.
Chapters (3)
I bet this is...
Like every single other fluttermac story out there.
That image is a tad... Saucy...
This is interesting. I'm going to be honest and say that it is clechei. Just make it more surprising.
You lacked details, you combined paragraphs, you kept adding apostrophes when you made a word plural, and things happened too fast and not realitically. I hope English isn't your first language.
I am undecided on this. I mean its like every other FlutterMac they meet fall in love the first time the speak to each other. That's not how people (or
ponies) fall in love.
i agree with frizzy and collins4112,this went to fast,you need to add more details in.
lol this was kinda... fast... but i still liked it
That was pretty good, but I have two problems:
A) It's very fast paced.
B) "I'm going to check up on AppleJack for Apple Season. (Please Check my Dash Cider Story for that please!)" Please don't force the readers into reading something else just to get an idea of what that means. Explain.
Other than that, I can't wait to see what is going to happen.
If you based this off Space Bound, i know where this is going.
Also this is going REALLY fast. You should slow it down a bit, its a good idea but its advancing too quickly
No
Kthx
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Aww
yep to fast but just slow it down a little bit and it will be great
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Ive not read a single Fluttermac.
Take that as a hint.
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I said tht because I was listening to it full blast :>
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I remember you from the Pipsqueak Story. :>
586033 I know that feel. For two whole weeks that was the only song i listened to
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:3.
Im an Rapper. :>
Friendlydynasty you went way too fast on the story the buildup was a bit tasking. This type of love would be one more likely to simmer. Also USE AUTHOR'S NOTES. That is your biggest sin, you want us to read another story don't interrupt the ongoing story it just isn't the way to go
it was... y'know... to fast and exactly like every other fluttermac i've read. i was seeking originality. i didn't find it here. sorry.
you mean "You hurt FLUTTERSHY, i'm not letting you near her again!"
right?
not to impose... or anything.... sorry
how can twilight be so devios?!?!?!?!?!?!?
