Sweetie Belle’s practice of using a teleportation spell backfired. Now Sweetie Belle must get to Canterlot to get Twilight’s attention... that is if she didn’t find herself the target of being crushed OR eaten alive!!
Alicorn Princess Twilight Sparkle, aka 'Princess Amicitia', bond by the rule to never meddle with free will or reveal herself, seeks to help ponies find happier endings in the multi-verse most infamous grim dark worldlines. Some wins, some losses.
He did everything he could, he truly did do his best, but in the end he was defeated, and for what? the ego of a madman? his own anger? his betrayal? barely surviving, Dark Spyro tries to find his place in this world, one way or another.
To absolutely no one's surprise whatsoever, Twilight finds out she's immortal. Now, if only she actually paid attention to what the Princess told her. It would save everyone a lot of time.
Twilight investigates some murders that she believes might be related to her. As she investigates, she finds out that the truth may in fact involve all of her friends and the return of one of the most diobolical creatures of all time.
if you verify youll countinue this story even with the unluckyness of only 14 views ill read it but i dont want to risk getting hooked and then nothing like in dawn and dusk
I'm continuing it for sure. Sure, I've only got like. what, 14 views? That's not really stopping me. Hell, its a way for me to actually expand on what I'm writing. This is the first time where I've seriously sat down and wrote, and from the likes of it, alot of my friends really like it. So I might as well continue it for what it is. I already have everything planned out anyway.
I've always been the unlucky one haha, less than 50 views isn't going to stop me.
also kindness must die umm i think that would be setting off alarm bells in my head considering one of her best friends is the inbodyment of kindness twilight you worry me sometimes
if you verify youll countinue this story even with the unluckyness of only 14 views ill read it but i dont want to risk getting hooked and then nothing like in dawn and dusk
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I'm continuing it for sure. Sure, I've only got like. what, 14 views? That's not really stopping me. Hell, its a way for me to actually expand on what I'm writing. This is the first time where I've seriously sat down and wrote, and from the likes of it, alot of my friends really like it. So I might as well continue it for what it is. I already have everything planned out anyway.
I've always been the unlucky one haha, less than 50 views isn't going to stop me.
463241 ok ill gladly read it ive just had so many storys get cancled im a bit paranoid
30 views is not a bad start. Keep working on this, sure it could be quite nice...
Strange to call a story like this nice, eh?
also kindness must die umm i think that would be setting off alarm bells in my head considering one of her best friends is the inbodyment of kindness twilight you worry me sometimes
ummm i am confused did i miss a scene or something when was twilight kidnapped? nvm ill look at the last chapter its been a while since ive read this
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if you're confused...it's okay.
I should've worked on a better transition.
fuck.