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Luna: "I think I’m falling in love with you"
David: ... Oh-kay... Ummmm... I... I have to go now...
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*Runs with him*
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But all in all love the story.
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You two, made me laugh so hard.
I like it. Continue, good sir.
A good story I will follow and soon I was done d'awwwing i read the comment by 459640 and 459534
Can't help but to LMAO
460692>>459695>>459640 You guys just reminded me of the time I visted the cave of Caerbannog!
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Thank you for the feedback! I especially like the funny pics from Bloodpool and Dusk Stalker.
I'm really looking forward to continuing this story. Let me assure you that I've only scratched the surface with the first two chapters. There will be considerably more content to come!
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We aim to please
Now I must go back to my fic.
Absolutley beautiful, one of, if not the best Luna fic
continue the story this is good!!! also i have a solution that will solve luna and davids problem... if luna can handle his weight even if it is for a hour or two and not that long why doesnt she bring him with her? i mean it seems he doesnt really have much to live for (not one mention of family or friends so guessing familys either gone or all over the place and his lifestyle doesnt say much for friends) except his farm so he can just come with her. EVERYONE WINS!!! *someone pops up* "uh what aboubt celestia and the equestrians?" *knocks out by smashing bottle over head* ok now where was i?... oh yea... EVERYONE WINS!!
Thank you everyone for the great comments! Don't worry Blahblahblah, I already have things planned out (your suggestion isn't too far off from what I'm planning, though I wont say anymore. Don't want to spoil anything. ). And I am certainly going to be continuing this. I started work on chapter 3 last night and will be resuming work on it momentarily. I'm very excited about this story! It seems to be my best yet!! Though it may be a few days till I post any new chapters. I want to take my time with this. That way the rest will be as good as the first two chapters!
BEAUTIFUL. so far... cant wait for more
459695 where's the "Cheers~IraqLobstah"? that's kinda your official catch phrase and to the author; you depicted what I want to do to Luna so here's a thumbs up Mr mind reader.
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Im not going to explain this a fourth time.
I cant do it anymore. Muff said.
469961 that sucks...if it was for rascism i cant comprehend why cause your an Iraq Lobster so theres no rascism ah well the internet has lost a possible meme
I have to say, at first I was a bit scared this would end up in some weird clop-fic but you managed to stay within a romance and I must say this is very well written! :)
So I'll keep on reading this story as I enjoyed the first two chapters.
Nice work so far!
Heavy will pay 400 thousand dollars to read next update.... For twelve seconds
I GIVE YOU ALL OF MY YES.
I can hardly express how happy I am that you all are enjoying this story so much!! Rest assured there is more on the way! I'm nearly done with chapter 3. I've only got a few more scenes to complete and then I need to give it a good smoothing over and edit to make sure it's ready. I'm going to give the same level of care to this chapter as I did to the first two. I want you all to be as satisfied with it as you seemed to be with the first two. Expect the next chapter late tomorrow or sometime Sunday at the latest!
Oh and Hang in there Heavy! The wait will be worth it!
hmm, i wonder if luna will turn human?
Now this was beautiful!! It's been a long time since I've read a true romance story! Lord knows Luna deserves some love already! Keep up the good work, friend.
Chapter 3... was better then sandvich
two thumbs up for epic chapter!
Ah, Monty Python, classic! Bravo sir, wonderful story!
460749>>459534>>459640 How do you people post this pics!!!!!
loved the chapter, although the clop could have been alot longer.
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Yeah, I know what you mean. This was my first sensual clop scene, since then I've managed to make such scenes longer and quite enjoyable.
I read clopfics for 90% story, 10% clop (really!), so this is awesome so far.
I shall continue.....
one of the best books yet keep it up man cant wait for the one were they raise the child
Master Jaydex, your stories are so great to read! I hope you still keep writing them. They are literature's masterpieces. You and Lord Path of Cloud are my favorite fanfiction writers. Thank you for writing these stories.
No... I RAN OUT OF INSULIN FOR MY DIABEETUS! HELP! THIS IS KILLING ME WITH IT'S D'AWW!!
(Also, am I the only one who thinks the idea of sex between a human and a pony isn't as weird when it's written then when it's a movie or art?)
Late as hell, but I don't care.
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I follow that philosophy in real life, and I tell that to my friends whenever they tell me about their pasts.
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Better late than never. And I thought David's use of that philosophy would help Luna to better relate to him and show her he's not there to judge her.
Well I'll be... David did a 'Ted Mosby' on Luna only she returns his love.
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And what exactly did David do like Ted Mosby? I know he's from the sitcom "How I Met Your Mother", but what specifically are you referring to?
The romance progressed WAY too fast, but it was still nice and waffy, so I guess that's okay.
Overall, it's pretty good.
Luna: "I think I’m falling in love with you David,"
David:
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I have no Idea why, But every time I read this chapter Jaydex, "Come With Me" By Phil Collins plays in my head.
Maybe because It seems to fit. Or at least to me it does.
I don't know what to say so...take it away Ron!
But besides that escalateing so quickly I like this story you get a like and a fav!
Damn, the romance flew at me like a tomahawk missile
other than that, great story, and excellent writing :D
5235278 Tomahawk missile inbound on your position
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tomahawk.... missile?
CoD DLC anyone?
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There's something that's bothering me to no end...
Too many people mistake "logic" for common sense.
"Logic" is the procedural formulation of truthful, actionable statements about reality. It is a method of analyzing the world you find yourself in, and finding grounding for further analysis - building up a world-view, so to speak. It's the underpinning of mathematics, which itself always apples, so to say that "logic doesn't always apply" is patently incorrect.
A logical statement would be one that, for example, said "I'm conversing with a blue horse with a horn and wings." - in this case, true.
"Common sense", on the other hand, is a collection of default parameters that are commonly correct, but need not always be. "When you hear hoofbeats, think horses, not zebras." is a very good catchphrase for the concept as a whole. It is a collection of experiences over time or area, and often over both. If you've never in your life heard of a black swan, you'd be using "common sense" when hearing a swan and assuming it to be white. But does that mean black swans don't exist? Absolutely not. And I'm not using black swans randomly - in fact, for a very long time they were believed to be nothing more than myth, until being introduced to Europe in 1697 - so not all that long ago.
A common sense statement would, for example, say "It's impossible for me to be conversing with a blue horse, horn and wings notwithstanding." True? Not really, as suggested by the evidence... So, in this case, despite him talking to a pastel horse, he's getting zebras. ;D
So...