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his nose, hoping to covey at least a
Convey?
Nice and steamy as per usual.
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Yes "convey". Fixed. Somehow I read it correctly every time I looked over that scene. The brain likes to be mean. lol Thanks for catching that.
Nice.
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I can't recall if I've seen you comment on any of my stories before, but I'm certainly glad you did on this one. I do apologize for the delay in responding, but I somehow missed this comment when it was posted, almost two months ago. Anyway, I want to thank you for posting it. You've stated what I've known about this story for a long time. It's why the updates to it have been so sparse. I have a good tale to tell, but as a whole this story is a living timeline of my writing skills. Which means the first half is very poorly executed.
More than once I've considered taking an axe to this story. It just isn't what I originally planned it to be, and it is all over the place, when compared to my more successful works like "You Brighten My Day", "Then There Was You" and my most recent "Since You Came Along". I'm not sure what the best move will be at this time for Luna's story. A major fix of the first 8-9 chapters might help, but in some ways I think this story would benefit from a re-write. It's just with everything else on my plate and the fact that Luna's no longer as high on my list of favorite ponies or my list of ponies I'm actively writing about, I think the best thing will be to put this story on hold for now. Give some serious thought and consideration as to what I want to do and go from there.
I can't argue with you there, no even a little. That's why I think this story needs to be put on the back burner, while I weigh my options. Thank you for your feedback. It's been most helpful it my making a difficult decision about this story. I want to do Luna justice, but this really doesn't. Not like I hoped anyway.
I've my suspicions as to who "Shroud" is: Blueblood
My reasons are that he's the only pony so far to have reacted to David in that way--and the level by which he did borders on the pathological far beyond even what other authors who've written BB as a jerk.
btw, finally all caught up. Fairly good read so far...but the dialogue is a bit stiff and sometimes seems rather backwards to what the speaker intended for the moment.
HI Jaydex I just finished rereading this story and, for me, it still great and the last updates are fantastic :) too bad you put the fic on hold but I will wait for the next updates as long as it needed. Peace and Brohoof /)(\ :)
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The hold is over. This story will continue. It just may be a little while till I have a chance to update it, due to my newest story. And thank you for commenting. Also, I apologize that this reply is like a 100 years late.
9005897 Would you put this story on hetis please? It'll show that'll you'll come back to it if not well I guess i'll just go an say this story is dead.
sorry but this sucks