When I woke this time I was not in any pain. I looked around and instead of the darkness of the Everfree Forest but the light on the Ponyville Hospital. I pulled off the cover on my bed and look at my wounds. There are bandages around where the wound were. I was about to get out of the bed, when the door opened. I looked up at the door to see Nurse Red Heart.
"Oh, I see you are awake. How are you feeling Miss. Sweetheart?"
"Much better, then I was before. Um.. how long was I out?"
"The whole day. It's now 10:30 pm."
I nodded and looked around the room hoping to see Discord, but sadly he wasn't there.
"You are looking for Discord are you?"
I heard Nurse Red Heart said. I can feel my cheeks heat up. I can hear Nurse Red Heart soft giggled. At first I though she was laugh that I was blushing, I was about it tell her to stop it when i heard a familiar voice.
"Well stop your looking Sweetheart. Your hero is here."
I looked around the room to try to find where the voice is coming from. I heard Nurse Red Heart giggled when she said with a smile.
"Look behind you, Miss. Sweetheart."
I did what she said and looked behind me to only see the yellow red eyes looking at me. In shock I jumped backwards, I would had fall off the bed when I felt hooves a claw and a paw holding me. I looked up to see Discord smiling down at me.
"Now, is that anyway to reacted to the pony that saved your life."
I smiled at Discord and said.
"No, no it isn't."
I then attacked Discord the a hug.
"Thank you, Discord, for saving my life."
"Your welcome Sweetheart."
You wrote this in 30 min amazing i love it
bravo bravo
4851534 Thanks
took you 30 mins...
man all the 30 min challenges I've done are either alcoholic or engineering or both.
4851804 I'll take that as a complement?
4851839 either way its fun to do ... I should do that... a writing challenge with a couple of buds...
4851850 That would be cool.
4851619 did you decide this challenge
4852381 I was reading some other 30 minutes story challenge. So I thought I give it a try. And I have to say I did really good.
4854646 yeah you did was thinking of the story part of the 30 min or was it separate do you some other 30 min story challenges so i could read it