Apple bloom heard a legend at school. Of course she didn't believe it at first, but when one of her friends got killed the way the legend said, Apple bloom starts to wonder if the legend is true or false. Now Apple bloom is on a quest to find out who killed her best friend.
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OMG!!!!
the links do not work.
well, for me they dont.
Lol. I know. I am planning on putting more on Friday.
4600896. Its awesome
Thanks. That really means a lot for me.
4601019 cant wait till friday
>Dat short description
Very interesting storyline, but Diamond Tiara's personality and Rarity's personality seems to be out of hand. Grammar can be improved and more words can be typed in to enhance the reading experience. Getting a proofreader might be the best solution. Overall its a good story, and I hope to see more of it.
You'll see why I made Diamond Tiara and Rarity personality that way later in the story.
2nd time reading its still fucking amazing
I lol'd this.
Who woulda known? Sweet old Flutters... a killer?
BWAHAHAHAHA!
4629265 that's only part of the twist. The real twist comes in the next chapter.
4629286 then make it. I need Moar
4629680 I'll have the next chapter by tomorrow.
4630794 YESSSSSSSSSS
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I need the next chapter!!!!
amazing!
guess the chapter
came to soon
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY
OH MY GOD I LOVE IT
OH MY GOD CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER
Yeah. The way to the spa going near the Everfree... Because that makes sence... I think...
Also. 11/10.
Sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel
Sequel Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeee
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
definitely sequel plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sequel with an editor/prereader.
I agree with serpent
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4914661 I love that video.
Hey not to be hating just you didn't use caps at the start of Bloom in Apple Bloom sorry sorry sorrry
NOT FLUTTERS :( I got depressed kidding but really? I thought it was rarity or Flutters but,.... this is almost like cupcakes and I couldn't sleep for three days after I read it,.... They need am extra Dark and Scary tag
Cliffhanger!
That still doesn't explain why she killed them!
shit man
damn this is deep
spooky but a great story, it's not even October yet, I'm already enjoying the story
NANI?!?!?!
ack a cliffhanger!
I would Like to see a squeal