It had been a beautiful day outside, but as I went outside, it had started to rain. Not only water came from the sky, also a gift from above.
As I had exited the town, I had encountered one to many strange things in life. A meteorite, which had cracked open, and inside it was an egg.
An egg.
This egg had changed my life drastically when I decided to take it home. I had cared for it, and now I'm sharing this story with the world.
Inspired by the fanfic 'My Little Dashie'
Don't mind spelling or grammar mistakes. English is not my native language. Coments and feedback is appreciated.
Chapters (8)
That was great!!!!
And I loved it!
But
Ponies don't hatch from eggs 
"I hold the glass out for her." I held the glass out for her.
"Pour thing" Poor thing
Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know ponies don't hatch from eggs. It just popped into my mind
456583 they dont but it was good way for the pony to get here. I have a feeling that this is of my little dashie.
460532 I was really inspired by that story yes. It's in the description
Nice work
.I can't wait to set what the gift is :).
"I looked at Twilights sleeping form" Twilight's
And just wondering if I could proof read?
Twilight left home alone? Well, can't wait for the surprise here!
That was beautiful, though when I thought of the mom, I thought she was like Fred's mom in Fred The Show, but now I have a change of heart!
NOTHING CAN GO WRONG!!!!(THEN) (Two seconds later) BANG! SWAT TEAM SWAT TEAM! POLITICS! CRAZY SCIENTISTS! CHAOS! DISCORD! 
Meh, a little over exaggerated but still I fear for what will happen next.
461301 Thanks for the help with mistakes. And with proof reader, do you mean like you read it before i submit it?
Good story man that
has to come to mess up and set up the story for the end. Good story in all man 
464723 thank you
and I'm a girl by the way 
A girl? Well we needed more uhh pegisisters? Need a shorter term for girl fans...
465092(Sniffle) That was a great story! The best MLD type story I've ever read!
464565 And nah, I'll can just read it when it's out then tell you, if you want.
465728 thank you
And that would be alright yes
Awesome
Make a sequel!!!!!
485700 Not a bad idea, I'll think about it
487567great
you also forgot Luna and Celestia
487733 What do you mean?
489205 You mean I forgot to add them as characters? I did that because they only appear once at the end, so they don't have major rolls
493217 oh
460532
It is, she said so in the main description.
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I doubt I'll have time to read this whole thing tonight, so I've added it to read later and will start tomorrow. Knowing this is inspired/based off My Little Dashie, I hope it's not as sad (and don't spoil it for me by telling me it is)
I read this in school. The only thing keeping me from crying like a baby is My determination not to cry in public.
So fucking good. I love you for making this
571863 Thank you
That's so nice to hear 
This is awesome. You should totally consider making a sequel.
622880 I'm mentioning it. Help me Mother SHE JUST CAN BE NOT THROWN OFF BY EXAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
948992 My exams are over now, but I still have other work to do
I am already working on a sequel a bit, but it's just one page so it's going to take a while
THIS! IS! SPARTA!!!!!!
I'm sorry. I couldn't resist.
will there be a sequel??? u said it, but it says u said it about 67 weeks ago, what happened??
the feels bro the feels
In the description it says that English is not her native language
Yeah, I'm making the corrections myself as I read. She can't help it, dude.