Two brothers, one changeling.
All three of them are idiots.
What kind of escapades will ensue? Will they be wondrous? Spectacular even?
No, no they wont.
//Alright, a big thanks to secretassassinn, he helped me so much.//
I know what you're probably thinking, "This guy, He is probably the worst person to ever join Fimfiction" Well, if that is what you're thinking, then you'd be right.
Two brothers, one changeling.
All three of them are idiots.
What kind of escapades will ensue? Will they be wondrous? Spectacular even?
No, no they wont.
//Alright, a big thanks to secretassassinn, he helped me so much.//
This is the best thing I've read all day! I'm smiling right now.
(Oh, and instead of using CAPS FOR SHOUTING use italics)
That... was pretty damn funny
4819758
I thought Italics were thoughts?
4819775 if the italics are in quotes, then it's like the character is shouting something. Plus, it looks more professional.
Ex. "WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING!"
or "Watch where you're going!"
4819785
Well, now I know
4819758 Alright, I'll be sure to fix it later.
And I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^ ^
dern sure a gerd stry
4819788 And knowing is half the the battle.
There is tag for changelings
And damn I can't read his name correctly I read is as ramen
wow this awesome when i first saw it i thought it was gonna be kinda bad(no offense) but this was good keep writing this if the next chapter is good than i might end up giving you a follow
4821384
Thanks dude! I'll try my hardest to make the next chapter even better.
4821424 well i take back what i said about the next chapter because i gave you the follow now
4821450 Thanks!
we will begin writing the next chapter as soon as possible and just so its clear were gonna be writing each chapter is an episode.
4821835 that sounds cool and i gave you a follow as well
4821739 your welcome. You past my two reqirments for a follow one write a story that will entertain me and two anwser the comments.
You mentioned his name wayyyyyy before it was given to him.
Also,
Don't you mean Blue?
4823151 Whoops,
Let me fix that.
4819758 Okay! It took me 1 day and 23 hours, but I finally got around to fixing that issue!
So...Yeah.
Hey you got dis wrong you wrote patch like path at some point in the story and im not going to tell you where
An interesting concept, I dare say.
4830022 FIXED IT!
Seriously thats great stuff you do here ! Don't stop
4834415 I'll never stop!...Until I reach the final chapter.
Nice
4834435
Then sequel
I have an opinion!
4836968 What is it my dear assassin?!
Nom
4840590
HOW DID I MISS THIS CHAPTER BY 11 DAYS!! Nuuuuu