• Member Since 4th Aug, 2014
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NeonVenom


I know what you're probably thinking, "This guy, He is probably the worst person to ever join Fimfiction" Well, if that is what you're thinking, then you'd be right.

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Two brothers, one changeling.
All three of them are idiots.
What kind of escapades will ensue? Will they be wondrous? Spectacular even?
No, no they wont.

//Alright, a big thanks to secretassassinn, he helped me so much.//

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 31 )

This is the best thing I've read all day! I'm smiling right now.

(Oh, and instead of using CAPS FOR SHOUTING use italics)

That... was pretty damn funny:rainbowlaugh:

4819758

I thought Italics were thoughts?:rainbowhuh:

4819775 if the italics are in quotes, then it's like the character is shouting something. Plus, it looks more professional.

Ex. "WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING!"

or "Watch where you're going!"

4819758 Alright, I'll be sure to fix it later.
And I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^ ^

dern sure a gerd stry:rainbowkiss:

4819788 And knowing is half the the battle.

There is tag for changelings

And damn I can't read his name correctly I read is as ramen

wow this awesome when i first saw it i thought it was gonna be kinda bad(no offense) but this was good keep writing this if the next chapter is good than i might end up giving you a follow:twilightsmile:

4821384
Thanks dude! I'll try my hardest to make the next chapter even better.

4821424 well i take back what i said about the next chapter:pinkiesad2: because i gave you the follow now:pinkiehappy:

we will begin writing the next chapter as soon as possible and just so its clear were gonna be writing each chapter is an episode.

4821835 that sounds cool and i gave you a follow as well:pinkiehappy:

4821739 your welcome. You past my two reqirments for a follow one write a story that will entertain me and two anwser the comments.

You mentioned his name wayyyyyy before it was given to him.
Also,

“Oh, so just because I’m a changeling, you’re assuming that I’m supposed to have red eyes?”

Don't you mean Blue?

4823151 Whoops,
Let me fix that.

4819758 Okay! It took me 1 day and 23 hours, but I finally got around to fixing that issue! :derpytongue2:
So...Yeah.

Hey you got dis wrong you wrote patch like path at some point in the story and im not going to tell you where

An interesting concept, I dare say.

Seriously thats great stuff you do here ! Don't stop

4834415 I'll never stop!...Until I reach the final chapter.

4836968 What is it my dear assassin?! :rainbowhuh:

HOW DID I MISS THIS CHAPTER BY 11 DAYS!! Nuuuuu

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