Walking through the park, a girl and her dogs find a portal to equestria, yet once she enters, how will she leave? She decides to get help from 6 special ponies... Set a little while after EG movie
Hi there! If up youre reading this... Thanks! This is my first story, so sorry if its crappy , or just like loads others, about a portal to equestria! Please tell me what you liked/disliked!
BROHOOF for reading my story !! Thanks !!! :D
*note to future self* turns out my other two stories are even worse! :D yep, it was tricky, but I DID IT!!
Editing: by Timmyrill , my awesome editor, who probably wrote most of this!
Chapters (3)
interesting story, a bit short, but interesting, hope to see more
Oh my...Very Interesting indeed.
"Luke warm" should be "lukewarm," without capitalization. You could also break up the paragraphs a bit better, to be honest. An interesting concept, and I'll keep an eye on it.
This is nice, but you shoud make the capters longer
4820390 :) thank you! Ill correct soon!
4820200 thanks!
4820177 yeah I know, sometimes I don't really know what to write to make it longer! Thanks !
4820552 ok thanks!
There are a few mistakes but a very good story and I can't wait for the next chapter
Thanks everyone for reading this & for the advice, I didn't think anyone would even know its here! And yeah, I know my chapters are pretty short, but they might get longer as I get to more interesting/exciting parts!! Thanks again!! Love ya!
THANK U!!!!!
4820656 aww! Thank you! And yes I'll correct it soon!
good story so far
4820628 You're welcome. Just being helpful.
...Ah fuck it.
Want me to be your editor? I've got nothing better to do, and I see potential in this story. How about it?
4821372 yeah, I know about the spacing but I have NO idea how to fix it!!!
4821443 yes please! Thanks that would be awesome!!!
4820818 thank you!
4820818 and thanks for the fav!!!!
You mam, have made it on my List o' Favorites!
4823282 aww thanks!!!! Really appreciated!
It has potential.
5031256 thank u
Not bad, Giz, not bad!
My only gripe so far is a few grammatical errors and how you made Twilight seem. She seemed a little... Bossy in my opinion.
Other than that, it's a nice little read!
5065462 thank you very much!! Oh yes, sorry, I think I might change it a little soon to! Thanks so much for the fav btw!!
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Any idea when the next update on this story is?
5098047 oh don't worry it's soon! I u want i can pm u a sneak peek? And I'm really glad you enjoy my story!
5101519 It's cool. I don't want spoilers. Not this time...
Interesting concept. It's how I imagine the only way to Equestria is. Through portal.
Plus, with the high improbability that Earth is the only habitable planet in the universe, Equestria may just be out there!
5101854 ok then.
Wow, that would be cool!
I hope that you continue with this story. It's shaping up nicely.