Wow, a new chapter already! Things are getting even more serious, hah! Poor bastard is screwing up everything now, I just wonder, how will all of these come out?..
She lets her panties slide of her leg and trots towards the bathroom.
"I think i do know."
"Its reaaa~dy!" A singing voice announces from the bathroom.
You can feel her tightening, an your hoof squeezes her flank in an attempt to prolong the inevitable. Ms. harshwhinny pressed her rear legs, pulling you closer, and you feel her squirming against the wall.
"You're staying until Thursday, right? Then you'll leave for Hoovingtown?."
Wow, a new chapter already!
Things are getting even more serious, hah!
Poor bastard is screwing up everything now, I just wonder, how will all of these come out?..
Only one way to find it out, I guess.
-Zeph
Found some things you may want to edit.
The only real problem is I don't know why someone like "me" agreed to do this in the first place. I think explaining it this late is kinda bad.
No need for capitalization here.
I know her feelings could change, but in a way it is stupid of him to suddenly want more.
Well...and athe same time it is sad, because I get a feeling that they don't stay together and maybe don't even see each other again.