This gon be good...

4825877 Hear hear!

Totally NOT incest!

Are you serious, this lie could not be more obvious, EVEN IF IT WAS BLINKING, HAD ARROWS POINTING TO IT AND HAD NEON BANNER THAT SAY'S "IT'S INCEST"!

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Shining: "Here's my full report of what happened."
i.imgur.com/v20QNs5.png
Cadance: "Why wasn't I invited?"

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People attracted to this story like ponyfagsflies to futa semenhoney.

So uh planning on continuing with a sequel.

Totally NOT incest!

I read this but it was a lie and now I've been triggered. How do you plan to compensate me for this shameless, horrifying triggering? And what if someone younger would read this without realizing they're being deceived? Would someone please think of the children?!

All of it!

4826436 Now, I haven't read it, because the comments are entertaining enough, but if they do what I think they do, isn't that EXACTLY who they're thinking of*?

*May or may not be of the future variety

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Dude, it's just first generation incest. The children will be fine, maybe freaky smart or strong but not totally inbred....

Featured!
i.imgur.com/ZNCNuZB.png

RagingSemi

Wait him? I thought he exploded a while back.

(Not actually going to read the story that just caught my eye)

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The plan has begun!

4826838 The art is old. The story is not. Also:
i.imgur.com/2IWQZUd.jpg

a) Twilight had already begun to give Applejack a few slow thrusts, preoccupied with watching Twilight getting pegged by the red stallion.

Great. Shining's just future-Twilight with a sex-change, come back in time to bone her best friend. (Also, pegging is female on male, not male on female, unless Mac put the strap-on on.)

b) What's with all the 'no homo' stallions, but the mares are the bi ones in the foursome? That's sexist discrimination, you know! When Sisters' Day rolls around, AJ & Twi are going to watch their brothers fence with their mighty swords as payback!

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a) Fixed.
b) Write it, filly!

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*groans and tosses it on the pile of 'Fic Ideas that MAY One Day Be Written*

4827132 Don't do that! THIS story was because Softy8088 did that! Also the event you're thinking of is the Sisterhooves Social.

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Oh, there's a mental image. After the pie eating, the obstacle course, and the barrel racing, it's the cock-fencing.

4827202 MFW that episode.
i.imgur.com/M3olio0.jpg

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If it's all the same I'd rather not

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Interesting.

"Rut me! Big Brother Best FUCK Forever! NNNggghhh!"

"Do you like corn dogs?" Mac gave him a sideways look. "Oh, uh, no homo."

WITH YOUR GENIUS, YOU COULD RULE THE WORLD!!!!!!

Totally NOT incest!

They're not biologically related, so it's not weird at all!

I'm glad you decided to pick up the baton from Softy, otherwise we would have had to wait many years for his promised release of this tale.

More Chapters, man! You're sitting on a varitable GOLD MINE! Ride this sucker out till the wheels fall out, give us MORE!

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Was the second one a matrix reference near the end?

Incedentally,i.imgur.com/rBYoATm.jpg?1

4828564 You mean, "It's just a kiss?" No. As rampant as they are in my writing, not everything is a pop-culture reference.

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Haha, no, I meant the "Hey Twilie, i think he likes it" line. Though, in the Matrix, the guy saying that was (mis)referencing something else (It's references all the way down.) I got the implication that there were multiple to look for and i didn't notice any other than the Motherlover bit.

4828612 Wow. Yeah, that was in the Matrix. But THAT itself was actually a reference to an old Life Cereal commercial.

Shakespearicles, you sonofabitch...
It's a good thing my interview's not today, or I'd be stuck in a (PUN WARNING) sticky situation!

4828915 Glad you enjoyed it.
On a side note, I'm somewhat partial to THIS version of that clip.

Twilight and Shining Armour?

i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/682/471/d3d.gif

Why do I ship that? It's so weird. Oh well.

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Oh, I haven't read it yet, silly filly! And damn, that's the most epic handshake I've ever seen!

The way you wrote this is so weird, it made me feel like I should've stopped reading half-way on the first chapter; but, the way you wrote this also urged me to read on and read the whole thing. Not a bad read in the morning if I do say so myself.

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Excuse my platitude but; ROTFL at pic-and-text combo

P.S.
"Shining and Mac both rose to their feet"
"His feet shuffled impatiently."
hoovsies!

"face with it's next spurt of juice."
- its

I think there were one or two missing ' in all those brother's day / brothers' day (night/etc.) and Applejack went with her 'Me and Twi' that (I bet) was 99,999% intentional in first chapter.

4829775 Fixed those.

4829723 Umm, thanks?

4829843 Don't worry, I meant it in a good way. You did a good job, I really liked the story. I just never read a story that actually elated that type of feeling before, I've either liked a story from beginning to end, or I didn't it due to one thing or another. The way you wrote some of the sections just made me feel like it was going to become too weird for my personal tastes, but it made me curious enough to press on and keep reading is all.

4832966 4830070 Ah, yes. Well that's just how I do.

You tried.

Upvote for effort.

I mean, it was entertaining and all, but there were a lot of errors. Especially comma and periods after dialogue.

Why am I not surprised you were the one who came up with this Shakespearicles?

And unknown to the mares they hadn't noticed they were in heat and were now carrying each others brothers foals.

This is eerily similar to a story I've had written for about a month, but haven't published yet due to busy editors. I'm not even sure how long I should wait before publishing it, as I don't want to "steal" your idea, despite having written it in June/July.

4835067 I scoured Fimfiction to see if anyone else had done anything close to this (Aside from Softy8088) I only wrote it because it was something that I wanted to read myself. I don't care what anyone says. I would read the shit outta your version! Publish that bad boy!

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Heh, thanks. Mine is a bit different (it involves body swapping and deceiving the brothers), but it's still AJ wanting Big Mac and Twilight wanting Shiny. I'm also concerned about a lot of potential readers passing up because I was slow off the mark.

... I still need to edit it.

More please!