Expecting consistency with the TV show? Want accuracy down to a point? then your in the wrong place, there is little consistency here and I am proud of it.
Sound Shock, a changeling who wanted nothing more than to live a normal life.
Soon after he cut his connection to the hive to free and clear his mind from the evil of the hives queen, and to be able to live with his mind alone, he makes a life changing discovery.
Now without the hive and a normal life ahead of him he takes on the challenge of being an earth pony.
*small amounts of comedy and very little romance so don't expect a lot of that.*
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Pay attention to capitalization. I didn't see "Canterlot" capitalized once, like all proper nouns should be.
4871340 oops
You could use commas, slow down the pace of the story (I know it's not easy, I often have trouble with it myself), spell checks and punctuation, apostrophes... I'm not disliking this story, it has potential, but if you fix it I'll take another look.
5014940 i am aware of the problems I know it looks rushed but the truth is I am just very confused about what I should be writing cause I don't know a lot about changelings in general and as I said before it is an experiment I'll do what I can though and thank you for your opinion it will help me......somewhat.
Merry Christmas everyone.
good story so fare. keep going
So there will be a sequel ... K thanks bye
5584858 yes there will be a sequel.....and possibly many more that continue it.
5585098 Anything else ?
5585103 meaning?
5586018 Adding OC for example
5586637 I don't get what OC has to do with this.............oh well.
5587376 Its just a thought