Oh how confusing! Fluttershy finds out that there are two different planes in living: the ghost plane and the living plane. but when Fluttershy finds out Pinkie Pie had escaped the ghost plane, she finds out how devestating "deals" can be. her adventure in trying to free a spirit of its dark side has its ups and downs, but...... well, you'll find out if you read all 3 parts!
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i have one thing to say, try to fill in what happened with fluttershy and the spirit.
good story otherwise
455753
Thanks for the comment and the read
But what do you mean exactly by what happened with fluttershy and the spirit?
456369 like how did she die?, why was her evil spirit resurected, and when did Fluttershy have a hood on?
you also need to fill in details.
the story plot is terrific but it needs more discription. i try to do it with my stories, as much detail as i can, though i am no good at it, apperently from the commets replied.
you also need to fill in details.
the story plot is terrific but it needs more discription. i try to do it with my stories, as much detail as i can, though i am no good at it, apperently from the commets replied. also fluttershy does not cuss... except in my immagination when she goes loco and gruseomly kills any thing in sight.
you also need to fill in details:
why is Fluttershy dead. Who is Sapphier Blood. How did Pinkie die.
the story plot is terrific but it needs more discription. i try to do it with my stories, as much detail as i can, though i am no good at it, apperently from the commets replied.456369
you need to describe more. you need to fill in what happend, like why is Fluttershy and Pinkie dead? And who is Sapphire Blood and Dark Reaper. What was wrong with Pinkie's eyes
the story plot is great! answer these questions and add the answers to the story and fill in more detaile.
456456
Oh. Fluttershy is dead in another fic I plan on putting on here later today.
Sapphire Blood is an OC character a friend of mine let use in past fics.
And Dark Reaper is a demonic OC of mine. She's two-sided (evil side and good side). At the end of this fic, her "light" side is released (Light Reaper) and finally she breaks out of her shell and appears as her normal spirit self, Starbeam.
Hope that cleared some stuff up before I post those other fics up today.
Thx for your take on my stories,
DjDa5h
456575 now explain that in the story
456398
How she dies.... She basically gets sliced in two.
Starbeam's evil side (Dark Reaper) wasn't resurrected, with the way Starbeam was killed ( a VERY gruesome death mind you) all the hatred that had built up in her roaming soul turned her evil.
And, in the beginning. Fluttershy has a hood on because I thought it give off the feeling of sadness/suspense of Fluttershy's story.
Hope that answers your questions,
DjDa5h