Everyponys favourite filly contracts a weird magical disease
I like to thank:
McStuffins for proofreading
The red knight, sleepy panda and Pastelights for editing
Arya Stark for general advice
I am very grateful for their help
"Love and compassion are necessities, not luxuries.Without them, humanity cannot survive..." -Dalai Lama-
Everyponys favourite filly contracts a weird magical disease
I like to thank:
McStuffins for proofreading
The red knight, sleepy panda and Pastelights for editing
Arya Stark for general advice
I am very grateful for their help
Because Rarity is a doctor.
Regardless, Your story is littered with technical mistakes, too many for me to bother pointing out. I suggest checking out ezn's guide to fanfiction.
LOL!
Telecough? Don't you mean Teleflu? Besides, she's sneezing, not coughing...
4914938 oops fixed
Every word in your tilte should be capitalized:
Sweetie Belle Contracts Teleflu
Also the description isn't grammatically correct either:
Everyponys favorite filly contracts a weird magical disease.
Now have a nice day
Ugh...PLEASE get yourself an editor.
Considering your description states that you're a Dutch carpenter, I'm gonna go out on a limb here and guess that English isn't your first language. That's fine, though!
I do recommend getting another editor, however, preferably one with a better grasp of the English language. Aside from the multitude of grammatical errors, you have a nice concept so far.
4915440 What do you mean with
the description isn't grammatically correct either:
Everyponys favorite filly contracts a weird magical disease?
have a nice day to
4915901 no it is not
4915716 are you available?
Sorry, I'm helping 4 other authors at the moment.
4919496 thats ok
Poor Sweetie Belle~
Lol just lol
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4919496 r u still helping 4 other arthors or can u help me edit my story
5499802
Still terribly busy, sorry.
Out of curiousity, did anyone edit thy long description?
5799189 No,why
YAAAA UPDATE!!!
They need a snowflake/bulk biceps face thing for this.