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The Power of a Dream

Golden Eye, a white pegasus mare, who is married to Blitz, a white unicorn stallion, had been having disturbing dreams since she had heard about his business trip and they have made her worried about Blitz's safety. Could these dreams have a meaning? Could they save the life of the stallion she loves? That's for me to know and you to find out.

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hailspider

hailspider #1 · Jul 25th, 2014 · · ·

Is this a sequel? Because if it is, it should say so. If it isn't, there needs to be more explanation on what's going on and less on what the characters are like. Readers can figure out what the characters are like based on what they do, not what you've told us.

Mist Shaker

Mist Shaker #2 · Jul 25th, 2014 · 1 · ·

It is not a sequel to anything, but in time the description I have given will sense. I have been given the advice of being mysterious with descriptions and intend to be that way, so please do not mistake this for a part of another story, this is entirely my own work.

bigphil2695

bigphil2695 #3 · Jul 26th, 2014 · · ·

Dude this story is..... FCKING AWESOME!!!!

Mist Shaker

Mist Shaker #4 · Jul 26th, 2014 · 2 · ·

4754011 Thanks bro, it really means a lot to me that I have at least one person that likes my work.

Golden Skies

Golden Skies #5 · Jul 30th, 2014 · · ·

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I feel that your descriptions were fine, perhaps a little lacking, but nothing could really be done to change that without it looking like filler. The story is looking great so far and I look forward to reading more.