This fic was originally cancelled, but as boredom struck me, I decided to continue it as my other stories are on hiatus or just sitting there. The first two chapter' wording is corrupted, by the third chapter and so on, I will write in a sensable fashion.
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Just to state the image cover is not mine, credit or a banana to whoever made it.
Hmmm about to read sounds interesting.
Well good story. The grammar could use some work but it's otherwise great. There is no lack of detail or dialogue. So keep up the good work!
if there drunk they should be like "dude, what does my tattoo say" that kind of stuff
good story
just to good
Your format is very annoying to read.
A lot of sentences didn't make sense.
Your overall word choice is poor.
This needs more work bro
I just need to point out that in the spelling of Fluttershy's name there is no space between Flutter and shy. It's not "Flutter shy;" it's all one word "Fluttershy."
20918 Well I don't suppose a 14 year old and english as my 2nd language, to write a good fic that everyone would like? Think bro.
20964 Yeah, when I write Fluttershy (like now) it says it's wrong, a red line underneath it.
Stop being a bunch of haters...
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the red line underneath is there because its a name, not a word, the spelling is fluttershy, no space
on a more related topic, loving this fic so far, cant wait for more:D
21118 Wait you serious?
You think I should continue this fanfic which contains
The format is very annoying to read.
A lot of sentences didn't make sense.
My overall word choice is poor.
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just because there are grammar and spelling errors doesn't mean its a bad fic, it just means there are some spelling and grammar errors, the idea the fic is based on is good and i liked the first two chapters
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Fine, I'll try and continue this, still have the urge to write something.
Nah, who am I kidding, I'll continue it
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YOU BETTER!
Whats goanna happen I'm scared for everyone especially fluttershy
