Fluttershy loses her way in the Everfree Forest, and pays a steep price. Danger lurks everywhere, and her friends won't be in time to save her. None of their lives will ever be the same. Will they be able to pick up the pieces?
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Mr Cerulean
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Good start, a little fast paced, so I suggest making it longer. Detailing was good. Overall I give it an 8.5-9 out of 10 for stories. Have a like
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Thanks for the pacing note, I have trouble with it sometimes, and thanks for the comment. Always appreciated.
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Awwww the chapter was so short I couldn't keep enjoying the masterful work of art. Good grammar, canon character personalities, very good overall writing. If it wasn't for the shortness of the chapter I'd give it an 11 out of 10