During his time in an ancient Canterlot, The Doctor receives a distress call from one of his colleagues, Colgate. Upon further investigation The Doctor discovers something that he had hoped never to face again.
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Awwww yeah, You go Romana! (ish)
Briliant!!
MLP + Dr. Who = MIND NUMBING EPICNESS!!!!
Heh, I'm glad to see others using stone pegasi as Angels. =) I like this story, especially Colgate's little thought process. Well written, although a bit short, but I assume that as it's labeled "Incomplete," it will be extended, yeah? Keep it up!
443882 ???
443916 Of course!
444165 Thank you, and the answer is yes: there is more to come.
444494
Romana was one of the Doctor's companions, and as I remember, a Time Lady. Colgate is often set as Romana's ponified self. Anyhoo, glad to hear it :)
444648 Thanks for the clarification. I didn't know that bit about Colgate and Romana.
444660
No problem; I just read about it yesterday
Awesome. Awesome. Rainbow would be proud. So would Twilight.
Absolutely brilliant, as usual.
Oh shit
477706 That's the reaction I was hoping for.
The weeping angels were frickin' creepy. I hate the sight based enemies. Y'know, the Silence...the Weeping Angels...whatever that darkness thing was...you know, that got into the people's spacesuits and, sorta...ate them? Well, I think we can all agree that those sight based things are terrifying...you should totally consider those other aliens...I love doctor who, y'know that?
486702 i will consider it, and everyone should love doctor who.
Agreed.
OH PINKIE!
Fantastic!
496781 Yes, there are three. Or are there? DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN
496809 Couldn't help it. I had been wanting to write something like that for a while and finally got around to incorporating it.
498035 Thanks Mr. D, it was pretty fantastic.
486702 & 498286 & 498321
Just looked up and saw the comment about the Silence, and I must agree with Aringsor that facing the disciples of Silence that were on Earth would be an epic story, and the Vashta Nerada almost seem like something that might already exist in the Everfree forest in a non-perfect Equestria.
499630 I might just have to use that idea about the vashta nerada. I like it.
I didn't see that coming.
503950 That's good, that's good.
oh damn
517095 Just wait until you read the ending I have planned.
This seems strangely familiar... Love it!!
woah. Shit just got real.
Edit: Also, First!
You were right, so very right, all the anticipation, the long nights trying to figure out what could be so awesome to elicit such excitement from you:
dat last line, now if you'll excuse me, I have to clean the walls of my room, and the ceiling, and every other surface due to your awesomeness.
532496 And it is not an acronym, it's an anagram. Acronyms are things such as PftALA, anagrams are the rearrangement of letters to make a new word.
Note to Torchwhoof: you guys aren't exactly the most genre-savvy bunch out there, are you?
This is Equestria. Arrogance and thuggery ('authority beyond even Celestia'...yeeeeaaah, sure) will ultimately just come back to bite you in the collective plot.
And if you ever do meet the Doctor, you may want to ask him what happened to the original Torchwood. You know, the one that's not actually starring in the eponymous spinoff series for a reason...
somehow i knew that they would be torchwood
amazing story.
539015 Thank you. I try.
532875 Whoa there. Calm down. No need to start a riot.
532808 I tried to warn you.
540518
if'n you know what I mean.
Still doesn't prepare a man, man.
540905 Eeyup.
540518
Heh. No riot intended; I'm just not a fan of "man in black" types in general. They're always just another bunch of cover-up specialists with their own agenda and suspciously flimsy excuses for what they do in the best case (the eponymous MiB in the movies and animated series of yore are at least presented as quasi-heroic protagonists actually putting in the hours to keep the world safe, and even they're on pretty shaky moral and ethical ground once one stops to really think about it -- erasing people's memories just to keep them from finding out the inconvenient truth simply has to be a violation of basic human rights just for starters), and don't get me started on the worse ones.
Celestia has a beard?
Yay! Torchwhoof!
Allons-y!
DUN DUN DUUUUUN!!!!
486702
You mean the Vastha Nerada, the shadows that melt the flesh, ecc.
They weren't really sight based, more like "Oh crap watch your step be afraid of your own shadow oh no here comes nighttime shiiiiiiiii" and such.
This is a very good fan fiction, peculiar too. It's very well written, but to me it doesn't seem... 'heavy' enough to actually be a Doctor Who adventure, more like a children's adaptation, making it perfect for the MLP universe.
But I do have a few queries:
-If the worm prevents teleporting and other mannerisms of the sort, how did it let itself fall through the rift (though it IS the Doc's excuse for everything)?
-How did the Pegasus end up in the worm without getting digested?
After all, it was alone in the dark, so it should have been registered as alive.
Red guardian, out!
Heh.
Oh, Doctor, always messing about with royalty.
And considering they are based over the Coltdiff rift (geddit?) they probably do hold more power than Celestia. Just sayin'.
So, what's next? Captain Jack Harkness? Daleks stealing the earth? A tea party?
Whatever you do, I have a pretty good feeling about it. And perhaps later we'll see the Silence, along with River Song? Or perhaps even K-9 and Romana! Or best of all, one of the guardians of time themselves...
My dear friend the Doctor's adventures are limitless and I trust you to chronicle them.
Torchoof... Heh... That'd be an interesting reunion...
Red Guardian out!
0_0 shit we have to save gummy
503950 agreed
Awesome story! But you need to use the correct "too."
"There weren’t to many ponies roaming the streets at night" should be "There weren’t too many ponies roaming the streets at night"
But the creativity of the story outweighs its grammar flaws. Keep writing!
ermahgerd.... it's little colgate!!!!!!
Is there going to be a sequel for this?? ( with torchwhoof )
1914610
You know, I've been meaning to write more Doctor Whooves after finishing the story that is....well it's not really in progress anymore. Plus I've been pretty busy lately with working on a novel, but I think I'm gonna go ahead and start soon on a new Doctor Whooves story here on FiMFiction.
It's 2:21 AM but when things are this epic, there's no way I'm stopping after just one chapter. Mind numbing epicness, indeed.
Hi pinkie!
Lol...
"there was somepony knew to meet every day" might want to fix that, otherwise great job.