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Long ago, the alicorns all but disappeared from Equestria. Few know the tale that were not there to live it. This is that tale.

Honestly, I just got bored and gave writing a shot. Let me know what you think (if anyone reads it) and tell me of any grammar mistakes I may have missed.

Art by me (hastily thrown together)

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 25 )

TRACKING WITH ORBITAL CANNON! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

And thus, Trollestia came to be known to the world ! :trollestia:

FIRST! yay in the club now

btw loved the chapter

a little short but still good :pinkiehappy:

423930 thanks, and heads up: the next few are gonna be short-ish as well, but thats mostly to keep the chapters from dragging on.

Luna: THAT'S SO COOL
Celestia: :facehoof:

THIS, was the chapter I was waiting for, because we all love, wait for it, MUUUUUFFIIIIIIIINS!!!!!!!!!!!!:derpytongue2::heart:

Freaking loving this story. :pinkiehappy:
Muffins! :derpytongue2:

so how long will short chapters be? this one is good but i need moar in one! :rainbowkiss:

428503 well, the next one will be about as long as 4, but after that they will be longer...probably. i intend to do a few longer chapters before the story ends.

Love the fic waiting for more!:yay:

OH MAI GAWD YES PERFECT CHAPTER!!! :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Draconequuian names man, they're epic. And Luna is extremely stealthy.:derpyderp1:

Might I ask why the majority of Draconequui don't seem to have reality warping powers?
Other than that, keep it up!

436697 There really isn't a reason. Officially you could say that they technically have them, but are not strong enough to use them. Its why Pandemonium is the emperor. Discord would be able to (he kinda does) and so would Entropy, but again, not strong enough (yet). I just didn't feel like it when I wrote it.

Understandable, besides it would be kind of a short battle if they could all use their powers.
And by short, I mean instant victory. :scootangel:
Which leaving only the good Doctor left to think of a plan that will be a billion times crueler to the lot than ordinary defeat.

437010 Yeah. I thought just a bit ago after responding to the first comment.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: this needs more likes

Great ending.:pinkiehappy:
I'm eagerly awaiting the next.:moustache:

Wow great story. I really dont know why this has so very little likes, no grammar errors, flows smoothly, nice ending. Its almost good, Its Awesome! Enjoy some mustaches
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

978011 Thanks man, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will enjoy those mustaches. :twilightsmile:

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