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Pegasus Rescue Brigade

Joined February 2012
1,351 followers

Stories (7)

  • Fluttershy's Bad "Hare" Day
    Fluttershy turns into a rabbit

    58,950 words · 14,957 views · 1,241 likes · 20 dislikes
  • Infallible
    Princess Celestia is completely perfect, and she's tired of it.
    3,107 words · 7,000 views · 848 likes · 13 dislikes
  • Hocus Pocus
    Dinky Doo begins her adventures as a student at Celestia's Academy for Gifted Unicorns.
    162,708 words · 7,586 views · 859 likes · 14 dislikes
  • Shipping and Handling
    Ditzy Doo winds up in the matchmaking business
    131,574 words · 20,056 views · 2,342 likes · 50 dislikes
  • Bing Bang Zam!
    14,303 words · 2,922 views · 227 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Kilowatt Hour Builds an Industrial-Sized Pet Hairdryer
    2,935 words · 1,520 views · 185 likes · 2 dislikes
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    8,000 words · 756 views · 99 likes · 3 dislikes

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After an unfortunate incident involving Rainbow Dash and herbal tea, Fluttershy wakes up one morning to discover that she has turned into a rabbit!  With her friends unaware of her plight, Fluttershy must turn to Angel bunny to guide her on her quest to restore her original form.  In the process, she is given the oppurtunity to experience everyday life in Ponyville from a whole new perspective, and discovers that there is much more to her friends' pets than she ever expected.

Cover art here if you'd like to compliment the artist: http://mischieflily.deviantart.com/#/d4wfix3

First Published
16th Apr 2012
Last Modified
23rd Jun 2012

Comments ( 1,042 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Oh my fucking god yes.

Take my money, TAKE IT.

#2 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

The concept is over used in personally for me in cartoons but this is good :rainbowdetermined2:

#3 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

OH SHIT ANGEL IS THE FUCKING MOB!!!!!!!!

#4 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

@Sir Lionheart Angel

That he is.  Sweet, innocent little Fluttershy doesn't realize that, of course.

#5 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Sweet Celestia, yes! This is excellent, and I love the personality you gave to Angel! Five moustaches, a like, and a watch for you!

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

Now I will always imagine Angel as a mobster.  Just need to find him a tiny Tommy gun. :yay:

#7 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

So, like...

Am I the only one imagining Angel being voiced by Joe Pesci?

Just out of curiosity.

#8 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

I like this.

and Gummy HAS to make an appearance.

#9 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>458999

Yeah as the enemy mafia gang or something

#10 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>459154

nah, I picture him more as the crazy guy that acquires.....things for the right price.

I mean, he lives with Pinkie Pie. imagine what kinda stuff he could get his gums on.

#11 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

>>459178

Hmmm seems legit

#12 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 1d ago · · ·

Copying my comment on the deviant art, this is Brilliant so far!  So looking for more of this already

#13 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 23h ago · · ·

@Blackbelt

Don't you worry.  Gummy will DEFINITELY be in this later.

#14 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 13h ago · · ·

Tracking this. I love how Angel has a little mafia operation running and how Fluttershy has no clue.

#15 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 9h ago · 1 · ·

You have no idea what you have created, have you? Well you do since you created it... but you have no idea how much yes I give.

All my yes to this. And my money, and house and ex-girlfriend. Except that last one - trust me, you wouldn't want it.

#16 · Chapter 1 · 128w, 6h ago · · ·

We absolutely MUST meet the other pony pets in this story! Opalescence, Winona, Gummy, Tank, Owlowscious... Maybe Philomena?

I have to wonder how the bunny mob works... Is it quite as brutal as an earth mob? I'd suspect not, seeing how, you know, it's Equestria and all, but I can't imagine Fluttershy will be very pleased to find out about Angel's 'business.'

It's weird though. You said that he had a slight italian (neightalian) accent... but I honestly couldn't help but hear him be voiced by Scott McNeil (Rattrap from Beast Wars) 'cept that Rattrap had a Brooklyn Accent. I 'unno... guess it's 'cause New York was so well known for the mob alongside Chicago...

There are only a few things I can really criticize here... The first is that Rainbow Dash seems really kinda out of character at the beginning. I'm surprised that she'd be so into Las Pegasus, at least for the things she says... since when has Rainbow Dash ever really been interested in Cultural stuff? Sounds more like Rarity's gig. I dunno, If she were squeeing about the city, I'd think she'd be more into the Casinos and the Bars and maybe some random Wonderbolts trivia or something (maybe Spitfire hails from Las Pegasus?) ...Not Restaurants and Culture and Scenic views and stuff of that ilk...

The other thing is there's some really awkward wording that kinda takes you out of the story in a few different places. One was that 'collective terms' thing, which seems a bit verbose for the Angel you're portraying... Another is the part "I know this is a whole new experience for you, and I can see that if I let you, you’d keep throwin’ questions at me all day.  But here's the bottom line; you can't rely on your pony pals to help you this time.  Now, I seem to recall you wanting to try to do something about this sudden transformation of yours, and we ain’t exactly making any progress just sitting here" Which really stands out as basically the author just saying 'yeah there are a lot of questions to ask, but we need to get the story moving.' That's the sort of thing that breaks flow and immersion. There are a few other spots that are worded awkwardly but those two are the biggest.

Don't get me wrong though, it is a really interesting story and seems like it'll make for some really fun situations...

Yes... We need more of this. Do continue please. I have to know where this is going...

#17 · Chapter 1 · 127w, 6d ago · · ·

Ok, what??? I don't know how to respond to this... But I think I like it! To soon to tell though. And what's with the bunny mob? Do they offer "protection" or do they deal in drugs (what would a bunny consider a drug anyway?) and weapons and stuff? Anyway, I liked shipping and handling, so I'm sure this one will be just as enjoyable. Good work!

#18 · Chapter 1 · 127w, 6d ago · · ·

Lol if there's a pun in the title I'll read it

#19 · Chapter 1 · 127w, 6d ago · · ·

@Cheerilee-party-hard

Of course, the bunny mafia will be expanded upon.  Wait for the later chapters.

@infinite scratch

So far I have two stories.  Both have pun titles.  Expect more in the future.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

this story is f***ing adorable! :yay:

#21 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 21h ago · · ·

"with what sounded like a Neightalian accent"

I'm sorry, I'm afraid the answer we were looking for was "Istallion."

On the other hoof, HOLY SHIT A BUNNY MAFIA! Why has no one thought of this before?! All of the yes is being hurled in your direction! Do not screw this up, capice?

#22 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 21h ago · · ·

I LOVED IT! :heart::pinkiesmile: But I can't wait for the sequel! I WON'T sleep tonight wonderin wut'll happen to Fluttershy! :ajsmug:

#23 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 21h ago · · ·

I like the happy fanfics! (You see that I am a Pinkie Pie kind of brony?) :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

#24 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 21h ago · · ·

Lol @ the bunny mafia.  This looks interesting.  Tracking.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 20h ago · · ·

Aww shucks Flutters... Ah jus' didn't recognize y'all there. Ya know, all y'all bunnies look the same t'us ponies. :ajsmug:

>>523734 Seconded! :twilightsmile:

#26 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 20h ago · · ·

I came here because of the tag "Rabbit Mafia" :pinkiehappy:

#27 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 19h ago · · ·

you got me at every bunny. u know it took me forever ti alter my human vocabulary to ponys

everyone>evrypony but now everybunny *Tracking*

#28 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 19h ago · · ·

Oh my, Angel is perfect in this story! It might make me actually like him! I know for sure that if I see him in the show I'm not going to be able to look at him the same way.:rainbowlaugh:

#29 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 19h ago · · ·

I await a protection racket at some point

#30 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 18h ago · · ·

So...Angel is the mafia leader of the bunnies? :rainbowhuh: Never saw it like that before...

But, gotta say that I love where this story is heading. Although Fluttershy should just write her problem down on some paper and show it to Applejack.

Keep track of this story. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

#31 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 17h ago · · ·

Why does "cooperate and listen" rings me a bell?

Las Pegasus sounds like a pretty good place to spend vacations, but wouldn't somepony notice that Fluttershy's baggage is still there?

#32 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 17h ago · · ·

I could think of no better way to portray Angel.

favourited :twilightsmile:

#33 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 17h ago · · ·

@The Brave and Mightly Pepper

Yeah, I've had the image of mobster Angel in my head for ages, I just had to get it out into a story.:twilightsheepish:

#34 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 16h ago · · ·

the only reason i gave this a try was because of two words....Rabbit. Mafia. :rainbowlaugh: and im glad i did!:pinkiehappy:

#35 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 16h ago · · ·

I've always imagined Angel with a Brooklyn accent. Just for that alone, I love this. :yay:

#36 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 16h ago · · ·

Angel's the Don. He runs a protection racket. Those are my theories. I dare you to try and poke holes in it.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 16h ago · · ·

Angel is a Mob boss.

Yeah, I think this is the best fanfic ever.

#38 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 15h ago · · ·

I like it. :yay:

Keep it up. :pinkiehappy:

#39 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 15h ago · 1 · ·

Of course Angel is a mob boss.

I'm just wondering what Tank is...

#40 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 15h ago · · ·

Hmmmm i wonder if the tea had any side effects :derpyderp2:

Also I hope the bunnies aren't having trouble with the local Gryphon minority, i hear they are carnivorous! :eeyup:

Good story! *favorite*

#41 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 15h ago · · ·

LOL I think at this stage the flower was heart's desire. TRACKING

#42 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 14h ago · · ·

Very good story.

Just don't describe the transformation in graphic detail.

If you do. . . I'll say it like Zecora: "Beware, Beware, my dear, dear, author: I fear such imagery will bring out the clopper."

Keep it up!

#43 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 14h ago · · ·

@Pederia

Fluttershy wasn't even conscious when the transformation occurred; I don't think she could describe it if she wanted to.

And describing it is just irrelevant, so don't worry, I won't. :scootangel:

#44 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 13h ago · · ·

I am liking where this is going. This looks like it's going to be one awesome story. :yay:

#45 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 12h ago · · ·

Wait a second... Main Mare? oh my Celestia, tell me that is a reference to Lobo. It's a good story, and I'd like to see more, so, tracking it is! :pinkiehappy:

#46 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 12h ago · · ·

@Azkhare

No intentional refrence to whatever Lobo is, sorry.

#47 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 9h ago · · ·

Huh, don't think I've seen a "Fluttershy transforming into a rabbit" story before.  So kudos on that.

I can only assume based on the tags that they're going to see Owlowiscious, that he's going to write out a message for Twilight and problem  solved.

#48 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 8h ago · · ·

Somehow, I find it completely unsurprising and totally in character for Angel Bunny to be running a Mafia family. :pinkiecrazy:

Good stuff, I wanna read more. :eeyup:

#49 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 5h ago · · ·

The animals pounced on the food like they hadn't eaten in days....

Angel has a special stash of carrots.....

Am I sensing a connection here? :pinkiegasp:

#50 · Chapter 1 · 126w, 3h ago · · ·

Holyshitthisisawesome!!!:pinkiehappy:

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