• Published 14th Jul 2014
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The Tale of Discord - lingonberries



Discord has turned Ponyville to pure chaos, taken away the sun and moon, and kidnapped Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and Princess Cadence! He only requests 1 mare to be his bride in return. Who will volunteer to be The Lord of Chaos' wife?

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The Date

They landed in a huge, empty clearing. Discord summoned a huge marble floor, and a small gazebo with cushioned seats and a table. He led Fluttershy across the floor to the table and pulled out a seat for the yellow Pegasus. She sat down and Discord pushed it back in for her, then went and sat in his own seat. "I'm guessing that you would like your usual salad?" Discord questioned.
"Yes, please," Fluttershy smiled. Discord summoned her salad with raspberry vinaigrette, ranch, feta cheese, and cucumbers, then got himself some chocolate milk flavored cotton candy and some cotton candy flavored chocolate milk, respectively.
When they finished, Discord asked, "Fluttershy, will you give me the great pleasure of... Dancing with me?"
Fluttershy nodded. "Of course!" They got up and started to dance slowly in a circle.
"Fluttershy... Do you like fireworks?"

"Yes, I find them very peaceful and calming." Discord then snapped his claws and a bunch of mini fireworks were shot into the air at once. Fluttershy found them beautiful- wait, were they spelling something? She read, Fluttershy, I love you! After she read that, she stared into Discord's eyes and said, genuinely, "I love you too."
Then she brought Discord's face to hers and they were kissing. Fluttershy thought that nothing in the world could feel better than this, with his cool lips against hers. She never wanted to pull away, she wished that she could stay like this forever, safe in Discord's arms, protected from the world, fireworks exploding behind them.





A Draconequus and a Pegasus. To be more specific, a draconequus that is The Lord of Chaos himself, and a Pegasus who is the Element of Kindness. How unlikely...

Comments ( 12 )

This is from bride of discord and you rewrite it .

You could just combine all of the chapters.

kinda havin a hard time thinking h3e could kidnap the three of them cause............. well their power gave twilight the power to fight tirek, when he had taken mosto f equestria and discord's power.

4693136 I haven't even read this, but just looking at the description tells me what this is.

Yep, now that I've read the whole thing, it's almost exactly like it, just without details of the development in the relationship between Fluttershy and Discord.

You could at least made up your own names for chapters to not be so obvious

Comment posted by NorthStar-Studios deleted Jul 15th, 2014

4693812 I'm sorry for not giving you credit... I really am. I was inspired to make a FiMFiction account because of you, DisneyFanatic23. I didn't know how to truly give you credit... I am so sorry!

4695768 Just mention in the description or something.

i loved it can it be longer or is it complete?

4796470 it is complete sorry.
:derpytongue2: glad u liked it though!
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