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After succeeding to stop Tirek and his evil advances all seems good until Discord collapses before the mane six's eyes. They along with Celestia and the other princesses try to help Discord but when his time comes they all have to forget in order to survive, but not everyone is ready to let go.

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This is a cute story kinda reminds me of ghost in a way. Can't wait to read more:yay:

Very cute and sad story. When Celestia said they are both husband and wife I was like, " REALLY CELESTIA?!?!!? I know it's cute and he's about to die and Fluttershy may never marry him If she wanted to but......REALLY?!?!??!" Hope there's a new chapter where Fluttershy tells the others about Discord after a while but they don't believe her and Discord shows up as a ghost and when he shows up the others get their memories back about Discord and they all live their life happily with ghost Discord :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks both of you! I have a feeling if it continues to go well I will write chapter "2" but I wanted to see the course it would take. Your support is really helpful though. Thanks again ;)

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Thanks! Sequel is in the works should be out by Christmas ;)

Fluttershy's eye's winded

Did you mean 'Fluttershy's eyes widened'?

There were some other mistakes, but small ones.

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Danke shen, please don't be afraid to point out the rest but again thank you

Nice story, but I'm kind of confused. Is Discord a ghost? A part of Fluttershy's mind? What did he mean when he said "I have small time?" I don't understand.

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This i will wish to answer in the future with a sequel, however I just haven't had enough time to think about that yet. All shall be revealed though.

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You sound like the mysterious old man in stories, giving vague, cryptic info that forces the heroes to use their otherwise useless brains.

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:moustache: <--- accurate artist representation.

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:facehoof: "Spike....What are you doing?"

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(cannot complete quote, panic)

"-cricket noise-"

:fluttercry: that was sad when discord died then every pony had to forget him. That was just... i dont know what to say. This was so amazing i have no words. For some reason i like sad stories like this. I think lots of people do. I love this alot. I hope there is a sequel. I hevent checked yet but i will. Again this was great :pinkiehappy:

This needs the AU tag. Because it's been established canonically that Discord did not die.

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Whoops sorry about that!

Deep and beautiful

This is AMAZING!

Okay, I know I'm eight years late to the party (about typical, amiright?) commenting on a story posted in 2014. I just wanted to say I think you have some really good ideas here. It could be groovy to see it developed in a less rushed way. Anyhoo, thanks for writing!

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