• Member Since 7th Aug, 2011
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pmcollectorboy


I'm a thirty something truck driver who lives in the San Antonio area. I'm a big time brony and a fan of Rarity. I hope you all enjoy my stories.

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After a brutal incident of teasing and feeling overwhelmed by troubles at home and feelings of inadequacy, Scootaloo runs away from a class outing in tears. Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom try to comfort her, and in the process of chasing after a thief, the Cutie Mark Crusaders find themselves caught up in a whirlwind adventure in a land separated from Equestria, a world of magical and sapient birds. As Scootaloo makes friends throughout this new land, she gleans important lessons from their lives. But the Cutie Mark Crusaders and their rivals, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, will have to gather more courage than they've ever known, as another war builds on the horizon. They would have to rely on each other, their strengths and their loves to survive. And as they try to find their way back home, they discover they may hold the key to finding the lost Peacock Prince and healing the broken spirit of the Swan Queen, and maybe ultimately keeping a realm from collapsing into darkness.

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Comments ( 11 )

Wish nice story!:yay:

Wow nice story!:yay:

Interesting, btw i found this pretty interesting song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=canNq-TM9w0&feature=related

So whoever gave me a 3.5, could you let me know what I could do to improve it? I really put a lot of thought into this story.

I don't seem to be generating much traffic with this story, now am I? Should I send this off to Equestria Daily?

I guess I'd better go through and proofread again right now. The longer stories get, the more difficult it is to spot errors.

I have a question, is this death and gore grimdark or just "deals with more sinister themes" dark?

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Death. No gore. I believe if you have to get THAT graphic with blood and guts, you're not doing a good job. There will be a war building up in the background, so if I get this on Equestria Daily, it'll have to earn a "Grimdark" tag.

But no main characters dying, right?:fluttershysad:

Interesting..but to be frank, I read because of Diamond Tiara, Silverspoon and Scootaloo. Hope to see moar SS and DT cooperation with CMC)) And that world... well, it made Scootaloo travel with Dodo, LOL

Ahhh why story so good now i won't be able to study for my exams :facehoof:

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