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Pippington Britishhooves


Those who can read and write hold the key to knowledge and the process of thought. For some reason, I have chosen to use this gift to write about fictional cartoon ponies instead of important stuff.

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Equestria: A paradise world ruled by princesses Celestia and Luna, who have managed to maintain a Utopian society for the native ponies for hundreds of years. It has become a shining beacon of civilisation across the universe, a promise of peace and prosperity for other worlds and civilisations throughout the cosmos. Why then would anyone attack it? Who would commit such a terrible act? What would they stand to gain? What was their plan, and how would it prove beneficial to anyone?

Spike: A dragon in Equestria, raised for as long as he can remember alongside his adoptive sister, Twilight Sparkle. He has grown to be one of her oldest and closest friends as well as her assistant. The two have grown in each other's presence, providing each other with the love, care and closeness that only family can possibly give, and a life that neither could ever imagine without the other. For Twilight, it is perfect - but Spike yearns for the one thing that Twilight can't give him; information on his past and origins. Hungry for answers, he seeks out the wisdom of anyone who can possibly help him, a search which seems to sprawl before him in a long, winding road. Who can give him what he needs? How can Twilight, the most important person in Spike's life, risk the bond that they have for a quest that seems doomed from the beginning?

With such an abundance of questions and such a scarcity of answers, Spike is forced to trek down that road quicker than he would have imagined as the importance of seeking those answers increases exponentially. Through hardships and confusion, difficulties and turmoil, Spike desperately hopes to find what he's looking for before he's drowned in questions that seem to be relentlessly forcing their way into his life, but none more so than the three which evade his every attempt to seek clarity:

What is his destiny?

What is the real threat?

Can it be stopped?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

Okay, you have my complete interest and you're off to a good start. I have to ask, is this a human story or anthro because I was confused at first? Hope to see more from you real soon.

4814847 They're human (at least in form) but they refer to themselves as ponies in the same way we call ourselves humans. If you see a term that appears to be animal oriented, it's purely for continuity reasons (because although they have developed a human form, their civilisation has not originated from earth and so they've found their own terms for things). Thanks for taking the time to read it, and thanks for commenting. :twilightsmile:

4815774 Okay, I get what you are saying. I've seen that kind of thing before though it can get confusing at first. And don't worry about it, you deserve that comment and all the others and like I hope you get.

Comment posted by beirirangu deleted Aug 10th, 2014

why do I get the feeling that this is going to be a somewhat similar story-line (about Spike and his abilities at least) as FenrisianBrony's "The Dragon and the Force"?

5983988 well, your Dragonfire is more of a discovery adventure. My Dragonfire is based off Mass Effect 2 with choices & people voting for the crew members.

5984111 I'm taking inspiration from a lot of sci-fi media, including Mass Effect. If yours is like Mass Effect, does that mean that Spike will be resurrected later? Anyway, keep on writing, it looks good so far.

5985635 it's more of a mix between Mass effect 1 & 2, as Spike dies in the beginning, is resurrected, and must build a team with loyalty missions to stop King Sombra and his army of Doppelgangers from taking over the Galaxy (I.E., Equestria).

@Pippington Britishhooves...

Just a friendly point-out... While your Word Count per chapter is very impressive (which is what brought my interest to your fan-fiction), they are seriously suffering from the "walls of text" writing error due to a severe lack of spacing between paragraphs and spoken lines. I would advise a light revision to add appropriate spacing breaks.

So far a really good story. I look forward to more.

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