Fluttershy has volunteered to run an errand for Princess Celestia, and must venture out beyond the Everfree forest. Applejack tags along to help her Pegasus friend. However, they are soon met with an otherworldly dragon and must defend themselves! But Fluttershy becomes too overwhelmed and is unable to run. Will Applejack be able to defend the both of them?
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I can tell this is an early work. Characterization is decent, and there are numerous capitalization errors and a proper noun misspelled. Otherwise, I liked it. You seem to have a strong, friendly bond with Applejack and Fluttershy that isn't seen much anywhere else.
I am enjoying how you view Applejack.
I've always thought Fluttershy and Applejack together was especially wholesome, not in a shippy, romantic way though (yet...)