You know how people say eating cheese before bed causes some messed up dreams? They were right. And bread seems to enhance the power, because I'm stuck in the most fricked up dream imaginable. Though most people I know would kill to be where I am, I'd rather kill to get out. Sadly, it won't be that easy.
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So far so good but you have to get rid of the walls of text near the beginning of the chapter. Huge paragraphs make the chapter seem too wordy and can be very offputting to casual readers.
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Yeah I kind of figured they were a little long.I'll try to think of a good spot to split them.
So far so good. Doin a nice job of impersonating Ranbow. There are a few grammatical errors that you might want to look at and if its Rainbow then ur NOT gettin my fav.
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Eh small price to pay for having no editor/proofreaders ;P
Mwhahahahahaha! Yes it is time for ze fungeon ya?
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In due time, my friend. In due time.
5%cow.......
I died laughing