This follows an alternate reality, where instead of finding America in the New World, the British colonized the magical land of Equestria. What turns would a revolution take when the colonists have magic to aid them, and what relationships can bloom in the midst of war.
Follow George Washington, where he not only has to fight the British, but deal with something much more difficult,
Love.
An entry for The Most Dangerous Game Contest
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/203875/the-most-dangerous-group-contest
Chapters (1)
wow......just wow never thought of that kind of couple
4610190 Want to know a secret, neither did I, this is what happens when your half awake texting a friend who writes insane shit, all day, everyday...feel free to judge me.
4610216 ...Screw you! I created a new OTP in your mind! Don't deny it, I have the log to prove it!
4610235 ...you mad bro, it may be true you planted the seeds, but i am the one who nurtured it to greatness...lol
4610190 wrote : "wow......just wow never thought of that kind of couple"
You think George Washington and Celestia is weird couple, try George Jefferson and Celestia.^_^
4610303 I know what i'm doing neeeext!
Eh. I don't think you picked the best idea for your talents. With the addition of magical artillery, weather-controlling air support, and superstrong infantry, the Revolutionary War would've been a much different game. Yes, I know the war is meant to be a backdrop for the romance, but I couldn't get past that. The man who planned the Battle of Trenton could do a lot with Equestria.
In any case, a sweet story, if one with a somewhat flawed premise. Best of luck in the judging.
(Also, how weird is it that George Washington is in two of the stories in this contest?)
what
4656990 would you explain, my dear sir. WiseFireCracker is curious.
4657066
I literally have no idea how to take this story. The premise is completely ridiculous, but it seems to be trying to play itself seriously. I don't know what could have inspired it. When it comes to this story, I literally just don't.
The description for this story is a little misleading. It implies that the magic of Equestria would have a major impact in the Revolutionary War, a major impact that we would actually see. This is the major crux of the story: it's almost entirely telling instead of showing, with descriptions and summaries of events rather than showing the events actually unfolding. As a result, there's really no tension in this story. And without any evidence of tension, the romance really falls apart. It's extremely difficult to identify with the growing bond between Celestia and Washington, since it never felt like anything actually happened.
The idea is certainly unique, but the execution leaves something to be desired. I bid you good luck in the contest.
Did you seriously right now make a George Washington x celestia
Son....you are a genius