The Human That History Forgot

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There is a "why" behind it all, even if the elderly, amnesiac woman lost in the catacombs of Canterlot doesn't know it yet.

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AM · 16th Oct 2014 · 1,155 words
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Meridian Prime

Meridian Prime #1 · Oct 17th, 2014 · 3 · · WILL BE ·

I don't think I entirely understood this, but I adored it all the same.

The Good Boy

The Good Boy #2 · Oct 20th, 2014 · · · WILL BE ·

so what i got from that is that that is like some sort of limbo or something like that

whatever it was a good deep read

Dark_Night

Dark_Night #3 · Oct 23rd, 2014 · · · WILL BE ·

The author needs to expand on this a bit more. It held a great story but it felt like it was missing something.

Bad_Seed_72

Bad_Seed_72 #4 · Jan 9th, 2015 · 1 · · WILL BE ·

Ah... I get it. I'm pretty sure that the Upwalker is a transitive state for dead humans before they are reincarnated as ponies in Equestria.

I hold it there for a moment and let it drip, and then I bleed on the page.

This would be added into my favorites for that line alone.

It's going to be added since this was brilliant. I think it could be expanded on a bit more, but as it stands, awesome little mindtrip. Well done.

Avox

Avox #5 · Jan 9th, 2015 · 1 · · WILL BE ·

5481890 That was the general idea, but I kinda butchered it five ways to Sunday with all my ramblings about eternity and "the point" and whatnot.

I find myself wishing I'd done more with this too, but I'm not sure how I would've made it into a better developed, smoother, longer narrative. But as it is, it was a fun experiment with first person and humans, so unless I think of something better, I'm content.

Thanks for reading!

Bad_Seed_72

Bad_Seed_72 #6 · Jan 9th, 2015 · · · WILL BE ·

5481998

You're welcome! For an experiment, I think it turned out well, myself.

Hermann Goring

Hermann Goring #7 · Jun 16th, 2018 · · · WILL BE ·

Well I know this is an old story, but nobody really said anything about some things I believe some may find unclear, so in the interest of future readers I will say what I believe to be happening. Every half century a random human is pulled from somewhere into equestria regardless of age (possibly those that died however). Once they sleep, they are granted peace in a way by being allowed to pass on to the afterlife and obviously dying in the process.

PaulAsaran