This is about my favourite shipped couple Derpy and Doctor Whooves, who are yet to discover each other and their unique bond in the world of Equestria and beyond to other planets. Derpy discovers some muffins, but what could be so special about those muffins? What secret do they hold?What does the doctor know that Derpy doesn't know? Could Derpy part with these muffins if she had to? This is about how Derpy becomes the doctors companion, perhaps more, and the adventures they share together. Beginning their adventures in Canterlot, but who knows where else they will end up? Enjoy :)
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I don't think you're going to get a lot of attention to story simply because of your title and descriptions. Hardly anything is capitalized, and that just makes people not want to read it.
Despite your title, summary, and chapter title not being capitalized, I found the chapter itself enjoyable. Several elements I enjoy in this fic as well
Oh, and one more thing, 'Doctor' when referring to 'Doctor Who/Whooves' should be capitalized, since it's his name.