Derpy Hooves hasn’t had much luck in life. Aside from having a bad set of eyes and being a poor flier, she isn’t exactly the best at working her job. All she wants is love, a stallion who will accept and love her for being the pony she is.
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Nice chapter to keep the story progressing. Thunderlane is working on ensuring the blame can be shifted by making Derpy out to be too unstable to keep around while Derpy really doesn't understand beyond her feelings.
I really liked how you got Derpy to focus on AJ. Her prompts definitely would be helpful to ensure Derpy was able to make proper facial / eye contact with those she speaks with. Lots of us take for granted the ability to naturally face someone to talk while giving off appropriate expressions. AJ, having grown up with Derpy, would be more than experienced in how to comfortably ensure Derpy felt comfortable in sharing her feelings while facing AJ.
It will be interesting to see what comes of Dashie. She's gotten herself into quite the pickle. Derpy did hurt Thunderlane and that does constitue assault and battery. Thunderlane could come up with lots of additional charges to pile on, too, which Derpy would not be able to defend against while Dash would have nothing to deny Thunderlane full power in the situation.
Dash is certainly going to have her hooves full trying to do what is right. Thunderlane has the law while Derpy has ethics on her side. It all actually reminds me of how people can be quite manipulative so they come off looking like angels even though they are the demons. The only pony getting hurt will be Derpy and how to properly keep her out of big trouble will not keep her in her current position.
Lots of thinking after this chapter. Derpy is innocent as her mind just isn't able to genuinely process what Thunderlane did to her. she thought she was following AJ's example and, well, it wasn't quite so. It seems we can definitely learn a lot from how laws and ethics often clash.
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Thanks for the kind words, pardner. Means a lot that you're enjoying The Bubbly Mare, and are able to take so much from it.
There's a lot going on here and it was really fun to write. Thanks again