(Takes place four years after the events of Fighting is Magic and five years after the events of season 4.)
(Also inspired by Fighting is Magic: Story Mode (Mane Six Edition) for the premise and Mortal Kombat: Equestria for the execution.)
Twilight Sparkle and her friends have arrived at the fifth annual Equestria Battle Tournament, eager to show off their skills in battle alongside many other ponies and other races from and around Equestria. (Including some combatants who don't hail from anywhere near Equestria.)
However, not everything is as it seems as Princess Celestia mysteriously disappears right before the opening ceremonies. What happened to Princess Celestia? Is this part of a conspiracy? And can the Mane 6 protect a mythical Pokemon from the clutches of a dangerous Pokemon hunter? (And for that matter, what the hay do Pokemon even have to do with all of this?) If the Mane 6 and their friends, new and old, want any answers, there's only one thing they can do at this point. FIGHT!
Rated Teen for fantasy violence and other things like language that might be barely noticeable but will exist.
Nice start. A bit rushed and flat, but we shall see to the coming chapters.
Faved for future chapters.
Dragon
4590598 Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to improve in the later chapters.
4590607
Definitely improved in depth but still has a bit to go.
Sorry about me being a bit nit picky by the way. I was reading high standards as of late.
But I'm already awaiting the next chapter.
Until then hope your feather glides lightly over the pages.
Dragon
4590953 Yeah, I understand that feeling and forgive you.
Don't worry, the next chapter is probably coming in a couple of days. Probably.
4590963
Thank you for your forgiveness my friend. Diaries of a Madman made me a spoiled reader.
And you're such a damn tease, you know that right?
Dragon
4590976 Gotta keep my readers interested somehow.
4591010 Flash Sentry should do the Johnny Cage splits move! Oh and did Pinkie forget the shape shifting Changelings that were everywhere! And Celestia got her sunbutt kicked man that's gotta hurt!
The story flows well, the scenes are well-detailed, and the battles are intense and exciting. I like where this is going!
I'm curious to see how far you push the crossover tag. Keldeo's already there, but I had a Super Smash Bros. Brawl flashback when Sombra's cloud appeared. Who else could emerge from the shadows?
I don't think it's possible to make Sombra act OOC - we haven't seen enough of him to really know how he acts. All we know is that he's an evil tyrant, and your Sombra fits that description.
4596090 Well, as you'll see in the next chapter, (which I'm posting in a few minutes) Keldeo isn't going to be the only one holding up the crossover tag. You can read it for yourself once I post the chapter. (And the spoilerific roster I'll post afterwards.
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4592890 I guess she did.
4599067 Have you seen my new blogs yet?
4599067 I've also updated super sentai cast.
4599113 Not yet. I'll check them out in a sec though.
Getting better and better here man.
Drafon
4599131 No ones talking to me. Now I'm sad. :, (
4603860 Don't feel too bad about it. People get busy, that's all. What you need to do is write a story or two and publish it. That way, you'll get more followers and you might have more people to talk to.
4599849 Thanks.
4607461 Working on a story now.
4607467 Awesome. Can't wait to read it.
4607469 Have you seen the new Beat it pmv?
4607469 Have you seen my new blog?
4607469 Are you awake?
4642794 I have not.
4646568 Have you seen my new blog yet?
4646568 So have you seen what Phantom Fan been up to?
4647529 Not lately, no.
4661908 Have you seen this video before? [youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=5xYO6pq66NY&feature=kp]
4661953 No, and I'm sure I could see it if the link weren't derped.
4646568 Have you seen this video before?
4661958 Now that's what I call omoshiroi (It looks better when it's written in Japanese.
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4661967 What about this one?
4661985 Holy crapples, that's epic.
4662004 I couldn't find one with Nicktoons characters.
4662013 Aw.
Try with Doctor Who or Pokemon characters.
4662019 Couldn't find any for either of them sorry but I did try.
4662123 As long as you tried.
4662125 Maybe this will work instead.
4662178 What the actual fuck is this?
4662195 Why?
4662221 It's confusing.
4662223 It's a music video.
4662228 I know. A Pony Music Video to be exact.
4662230 Have you heard of the music video Tweet it?
4662236 I have not.
4662239 Here have a look.
4662246 Better... but I'm still confused. I guess Michael Jackson songs do that.
i.imgur.com/UnWuoIp.png
4662279 By the way I'm on Fanfiction now.
4662291 Cool
4662295 My first story on it is going to be called Danny Phantom vs The Last Airbender.
4662302 Ok
4662303 What do you think of my idea?
4662309 Do you mean normal or Shyamalan The Last Airbender?