Twilight has a crush. A crush on her friend Rainbow Dash. That wouldn't be so bad except for the fact that Rainbow has a marefriend all ready. So, when she by accident tells Rainbow all at a party, the only way she thinks she can solve it, is by crying and selfhatred. But then, comfort comes from somepony she never expexcted.
12/7-14: Some reworking done, with the help of wdeleon with editing. Eternally grateful to you!
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I like this.
But then again I'm a sucker for unrequited love.
4581058 Well, sometimes...we all are. Thanks!
I enjoyed the story, although the text could use some proofreading and editing just to polish up a few rough spots. I could probably help you with that, if you'd like.
4681278 Oh, thank you! That would be much appreciated! :)
4681369 No problem. I'll go over the text and send you back a copy with some recommendations for edits in a private note. May take a few days, depending on some things.
Okay, yeah, I get what you mean, but friggin' hell that's quite a word to just throw in there.
Also, Fluttershy WOULD listen, no matter what.
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Yeah, it is a bit over the top, but that's the way Twilight feels.
And well, Fluttershy would listen to sober Twilight or sad Twilight, but passive aggressive walking bottle of vodka angry Twilight scares the shit out of her.