This story is a sequel to Answered
After a night of scouring the Northern Districts, AKA the Crystal Empire, the girls return to the hotel for the night. However, when they see that Pinkie isn't there, they go on a search to the place she said she'd be at: the dance she was catering. But, when they get there, they not only find Pinkie, but their old chemistry professor, Mr.Sombra! Wait a second, are they hugging? And is that an engagement ring?!
Fourth installment of the EG SombraPie series.
This is an incredibly cute story, and a wonderful addition to the SombraPie EqG saga. Kudos on another great fic!
Also I sympathize with Rainbow, Chemistry class is hard!
Yay! Excellent and super cute, I really loved Rarity in this story! Thumbs up!
***Applause*** YOU TELL THEM, PINKS!
I liked this much, much better than I was expecting to! The former teacher/student dynamic has always worried me, but the tone felt different here, and Pinkie's defense of her ability to make her own decisions absolutely won me over. Well done.
I have read all of these so far in under twenty minutes. I have the strangest urge to make a fic where Sombra sings Let It Go.
Where's twilight?
Poor, poor Sunny...
Called OUT!
That'll do Sunny, that'll do.
I liked the whole story, but I think my favorite part of this story was how you write Sunset Shimmer.
Great sequel ending or something. Anyways, it was good! And funny. Very funny. I also like your frozen references.
Great story
How many more stories do you have in mind for this universe
Aww yeah you go girl! you tell em! Seriously we need to see this side of pinkie written more often.
Yay!!!!!
Featured!
Half of me says " Hey, we need another story of how AJ and Shy react." The other says," WEll this seems like a perfect stopping point."
So a spin off crack ship story of a crack ship story in the same world of a shitty movie that was made from a mixture of crack and watching high school musical while taking said crack
This is somewhat relevant
Excuse me?
4806948 Sunset=pony flash=human
High five Sombra!
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Oh right. I keep forgetting that.
So, is there supposed to be a joke about him being a chemistry teacher, or is that just me thinking to hard on it?
I loved this. simple, sweet and the banter between Rainbow and Sombra was funny.
I liked Sunny in this too. I always thought of her as the group snarker when Twilight left.
(Previous comment deleted because my phone posted it before I finished and wouldn't let me edit it afterwards.)
I love how you took an already unusual ship and then making it even more unique by putting it in the Equestria Girls universe. But I think that splitting it into multiple stories was a huge mistake. You might be able to get away with having the first one separate, but the last three stories really aren't self-contained enough to justify having them as separate stories.
worlds cutest pinkie vector.
SUNNY (D)
4809033 Hmm. Someone just said something like that to me. I don't know if Harmony Charmer's in the same position, but a lot of my stuff is tacked on, one fic at a time. It's not planned in advance. It's only recently that it's started to hang together loosely as a story arc. Many times I've thought, "oh, this is the last one," and then I've had another idea and gone on. If I wrote it all as a huge long-runner, it would have to have a whole through plotline and I'd have to keep track of multiple plot threads and basically, I'd just quit. It would be a huge pain.
Not to mention that with a long-runner, you get constant scrutiny about whether X plot point was ever followed up on and when you're going to update and all of that stuff.
But I'm not sure if that's what you meant.
Its actually the Fifth installment
4804115 Only the Thermodynamics part was hard. And Stoichiometry is fun to say (hard to spell)
4809743 I think it's fifth in terms of publication, but fourth in terms of in-series chronology.
Literary Sins: EVERYTHING WRONG WITH:
Found out by Harmony Charmer
Spoilers Inbound
AJ has Batman Syndrome Ding!
She's Pinkie Pie, yes she does. Ding!
Author tries to be slick by trying to bypass the fact that they should all be knocked over drunk right now. Ding!
AJ, who supposedly drunk the most booze becomes sober instantly.Ding!
Forever Alone and doesent even realize it....... so sad.... Ding!
Yes, Little Miss Rarity, that's a job for your Secret Life Ding!
Supposed prestigious school somehow allows random teachers and strangers to sneak around unnoticed at night Ding!
Rarity describes the entire previous story in one fell swoop Ding!
Wait, so Sombra and Pinkie are close enough to be heard by Sunset's group, but all three of them together can't be heard by either one of them? That's hella sinful! Ding!
Personally feel complimented, but be offended for your gender, that's how this works. Ding!
No that was nearly exactly what Sunset meant Ding!
Which, in itself, is a response Ding!
I don't have gun, but I do have a sin counter Ding!
Final Sin Count: 13
Sentence: "Gorgeous diamond ring I would kill someone for," Death
4811383 Congratulations, you hav been sinned by us. Yay! Therefore, I would politely ask you to add your story, should you chose to keep your sin badge, to our awesome group Literary/Fiction Sins You could also join if you want to
Awesome,
Also Sunset Shimmer wins with the snarkyness.
Sooo... Sequel? (DON'T SHOOT ME!)
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I'm not going to shoot you but I will stand beside you.
With RD doing all that being disgusted by (this is her face: ), I'm like this: you're gonna go through eventually Rainbow!
A pretty good story, waiting to see Ajs and Flutters Reactions.... Maybe a sequel, and i will like to see the other girls finding their love.
4816533 At least I won't die on my own.
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I actually have a sequel of sorts planned, but it doesn't follow this one immediately. It'll be a little mini-series where Sombra and Pinkie from Equestria show up in the EG world, and both couples must accommodate for each other while the Equestria pair has to figure out a way to get back.
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Interesting. At least they are not doing a shotgun wedding that evening.
4821294 Sounds interesting... Do it.
Yay but that Sombra Ass though! xD
4821294 I would pay money to see that. I bet it'll come out awesome.
Please continue these, they're brilliant.
Daww, Pinkie and Sombry are Soooooooo Cute!
whens the sequel coming?
I know that feel, Sunny. At least there's science. And fanfiction.