So you cut...right before...the part most of your readers are waiting for. I personally don't care, but from a narrative perspective it's a bit of a tease. Which I guess is alright when you really think about it.
Dude, first off, try to have some class. Second, if you really can't wait, you have no imagination, or can't use Google. Which wouldn't surprise me, I've met people like that.
Just read the first three when this popped up
623841 Woah! Awesome timing then!
623841 Woah! Awesome timing then!
images.sodahead.com/polls/000240569/polls_awesome_3432_231682_answer_1_xlarge.jpeg#you%20are%20awesome
623929 Why thak yeh Sugarcube!
So many spelling errors!!! My.... My college level senses are tingling... It sucks!
Stop teasing us with these short chapters and get to the good stuff! My genitals can't stand the waiting!
So you cut...right before...the part most of your readers are waiting for. I personally don't care, but from a narrative perspective it's a bit of a tease. Which I guess is alright when you really think about it.
624307
Dude, first off, try to have some class. Second, if you really can't wait, you have no imagination, or can't use Google. Which wouldn't surprise me, I've met people like that.
The evils of ending chapters at their highest point. XD.
I noticed few minor errors, a lack of apostrophes where needed, and the biggest offender "iin" I do believe you have a rogue i.