This story is about a sad Applejack, that finds herself lost without a clue. And running out of hope. Yes she has many friends; is loved by many. Yet she cant help but feeling hopeless and like everything is worthless. Even herself. Her two friends are trying to help her. Yet can't figure out how. Her best friend Vinyl Scratch cant figure out how to save her. And she finds herself falling for her best friend Caramel. So a romantic twist in this heartbreaking tale of a pony without a clue.
Chapters (6)
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Sir/Madame, as a fellow writer who is just starting, I realize that peoples opinions are critical at this stage, so I will give you mine.
Out of respect for the dedication it takes to write a story of any length or genre.
423441 huh...?
Hmm, opinion time once again.
A very nice concept, and the story is written very well but I suggest getting a prereader at some point to catch some of the grammatical errors.
If you do that this has a great deal of potential.
This has been my honest opinion, Devilblade out.
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I realize there's grammatical errors. I do not want to change them; for the perfect fact of i want this story to fully show who i am, and my own originality. Which may not actually mean having everything be correct. For the simple fact, nothing at all is perfect. So why should i try to make my story like that? Thank you very much though; but i am aware of the errors, yet would rather not change them.
423468 Very unique approach. Huh, I can respect that. It takes a big person to fully embrace who they are and make no excuses for it.
I will definitely follow this story to see where it goes.
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Alright sounds like a good plan :) Hope you enjoy it, im working on chapter 2 now; hoping to get it done before the end of the night.
423527 I will check it out if I'm not working on my story when I wake up, seeing as I will probably be asleep by the time you release chapter 2.
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Well i should have it out before 11.
423595 Sounds good, however I'm going to sleep.
I'll check it out when I wake up.
Check out my story if you get the time, as I am unsure as to how good/bad I'm doing and love to hear feedback from my peers.
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I will read yours tomorrow. I really need to get farther in my own. But good night and thank you for the feedback! it's always welcomed.
I have read all the chapters that have been released so far and you are getting a lot better with each chapter.
Eagerly tracking.
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Thank you. Im trying hard on this.
Have you a thumbs up from me.
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Keep it up.
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Thank you i will. Im having a bit of trouble with the next chapter, but ill hopefully have it out in the next day or two.