To restore their family heritage. Pitch and Sabre have one mission in mind. To rehabilitate their forefather. The master of darks arts, Sombra.
However, they doubt that they only can make him good again as there’s more to him then they hoped. Namely, his first act upon freedom is to ensure the Crystal Empire with fear and kidnap Princess Twilight Sparkle.
While Canterlot watches the Crystal Empire intensively. Surely the famed Princess of Friendship can help Pitch and Sabre reform Sombra?
Chapters (12)
Very nice!Continue, yes?
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Of course :-)
2-3 days for the second and third chapter from being posted. Just reading/editing them through ^_^
4545187 Fantastic!
This is a great story. I hope this gets updated soon, but I can't rush an author and his work.
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Very soon now, just re-reading/editing the second chapter again
Will certainly be up in a few hours.
Hopefully I can get the following chapters out more regularly. I need to make myself a Twilight-like schedule for this.
Beauty and the Beast-ish story?
:P
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Ah-hah! :D
My hope is that it doesn't take away from the story buts adds something to it instead.
I was curious if the references/adaption/parody (or whatever you'd like to call it) would be noticed.
It is rather noticeable, huh?
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Cool!Looking forward to future chapters!^.^
Man! You really made a long chapter this time! Heh?
Love it!
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Glad you're enjoying the story so far ^_^
Hope I can continue to do so
Ohhhhhhhhhh.
I get the feeling this is based of beauty and the beast!
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Too true, it has some trappings of The Beauty & The Beast. I hope by centering the story in/around Sombra that that vail adds to the greater whole of the story.
Aww beauty and the beast reference, cute <3
Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?
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Honestly, no idea. I know what I want for the beginning and the end of the story. As for the rest of it it progresses towards that end with no set-in-stone pathway as to what will happen next. I am trying to fill this story with as much content as I can without seeming overbearing or unnecessary. Sooo, perhaps, it could be a thing.
Giving R.D.'s disposition in chapter 3 it's a certain possibility. Just depends on how the story pans out. Given now I am thinking about it I'm interested to see if I could write it in somewhere
I hope you do a library scene.
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A library scene? Can do. I believe my fourth chapter will have a library scene.
Been a bit slow as of late with writing but the newest chapter should be finished by...hmm...lets say 2-3 weeks.
I hope you do a ball dance scene to.
Is there going to be Twibra shipping???
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Wouldn't that be ruining the surprise? :3
Maybe....
Are you alive?
I'm really dying to know what's going to happen next
It's nice to see this story again. Sombra's interaction with Amethyst and Cadence was really interesting as it shows that Sombra actually has a heart despite what he thinks.
So glad to see this story again.
When do you plan on writing more
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Hopefully not too long. I at about 85% sure for what I want for the next chapter. The challenge at the moment is there's lots of characters to have to think about and I want them to a little part to play in the larger scheme of things.
Just found this story and I like where it's going. Fav, fallow, and like :-) can't wait for the next chapter.
Please update your story soon it feels like it's been years
7816762 You're telling me ^_^; It's being worked on and has developed rather a lot in the last two months...I think I'm just a slow as writer :/
Good job on the movie reference.
You dang done GOOFED!!!!
They need Disssccccoooorrrddddd~~~~~
I see what you're trying to do with the beauty and the best like approach, but it feels strange because Twilight looks to be jumping in and out of character.
Okay, I understand you want to add some beauty and the beast to the story, but it feels kind of forced and it makes the characters act out of there norm. So far Sombra has shown no reason to be suddenly mad at Twilight, so far he has shown mostly indifference if not some mild annoyance towards her, but nothing to make him get angry at her. It just all feels out of place. It would make more sense if Sombra kidnapped Twilight because he saw her magical potential and power and wished to make her his queen, that's a plot line that hasn't been done much if at all.
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Really? You look fine to me.
Remind me of Beauty and the Beast with Sombra saying beast all the time don't help
Up until to this line.
It kinda similar to the story of 'the beauty and the beast's XD
Ohhhh~ I think I Know what your getting at
I.AM.LOVING.THIS.BEAUTIFUL.STORY!!!! It's getting interesting and interesting!
Sighh~ such a wonderful happy ending though I REALLY thought Sombra is gone for good, thank God he didn't