A godlike being unlike any other descends from the heavens. A titan of flesh and steel rises from the earth. In their wake they leave unfathomable destruction, and a message of worse to come.
Now the fate of the world rests on the shoulders of young earth pony Bleeding Heart, piloting a beastly machine both incomprehensibly alien and frighteningly familiar. Together with the Elements of Harmony, he must battle a foe determined to see Earth burn, and uncover the secret that connects his enemy to the races of the Earth, both past and present.
Maybe a few spelling errors, but I liked it, considering I AM Luna. Not sure why there are 2 dislikes (probably like me and disliking your own stuff). Either way, look over some spelling and grammatical errors and you've got a good start
It's pretty good...
Please continue! I've been wanting something like this for the longest time.
Please keep writing! This is very interesting. I love both NGE and of course MLP:FiM. This has a lot of potential.
You gonna continue this, or should i consider it abandoned.
Moar! MOAR!
please more ;_;
I don't understand why there's so many dislikes.