• Published 7th Apr 2012
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Virgin in the Night - W1kk3d_Mango



Luna recognizes a small pony, and decides to take her out on a small adventure. The two soon find love and Fluttershy's wounded heart is hea

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"Virgin in the Night"

(ಠ_ಠ) Subtle.

"Luna's soft gave looking deep into her soul." I think you mean gaze, and having "Luna's deep blue eyes were seeing into her" right after it seems somewhat redundant. :moustache:

424495 Thanks lol :derpyderp2: good feedback! I'll adjust that.

:trollestia: Lol molestia would love this, yes?

Wow, I didn't think Fluttershy would have it in her.

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It's always the quiet ones...

Why does this have a teen tag? :rainbowhuh:

Little rapey of Luna. I thought she, of all mares, would understand the importance of verbal consent.

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