Equestria is gone, the elements of harmony are lost and scattered throughout a vast and unknown multi-verse of numerous worlds. Princess Luna was separated from her sister and sent to a strange new world were she is on longer the same pony she once was coupled with a new body. In this world she takes on three young children as her personal students to teach them how to protect themselves from the creatures once thought as myths in Equstria, she trains them to be knights...but she won't be raising them alone. Bonbon and Lyra are along for the ride as the three adult traverse the ups and downs of parenthood and what it means to be a family.
TMNT 2k12 Crossover with MLP:FiM.
Elven years will pass by, for Luna it'll be like blinking, but with her students all grown up she and her dear friends will be forced to take a back seat and watch as they team up with an equally strange family of ninja turtles and their ratty father to uncover the evil that took away their beloved home world, to find others of their kind and venture into the throws of teen drama and romance.
This is the story of Luna's Knights.
Mona Lisa The Dragon
Dinky Doo The Unicorn
Swift Heart The Pegasus
*yes shameless self insert of personal OC*
Amazing! I know nothing about TMNT but I did watch the show like once when I was bored and there was nothing to do. You should continue this for sure! Also any good advice from a writer to another writer? I've tried writing that are almost like this but I can't really get them out right...
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well I like to roleplay out scenes and imagine I'm the characters and I'm talking to them and there talking back...yeah that sounds really weird but it really helps but sometimes putting yourself in the characters shoes helps you imagine the situation better then you feel better at writing what you want...at least that is what works for me. Think about what situation you want then put yourself in the act basically
4527097 Oh wow thanks! I never thought about it like that!
Good story. Will we be finding out what happen to other MLP character in this story? Or do you plan to make those seprate stories?
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You'll have to keep reading to find out
*Knights
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hehe thanks for pointing that out! Fixed it!
I don't often fav stories that aren't finished (just in case they get cancelled or start to become rather crappy) but this holds promise.
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Thank You! I hope to this lives up to your expectations!
4541465 By the way, wasn't Mona Lisa the mutant that Raphael had a thing for in the original cartoon series?
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Yes, I loved Mona Lisa soo much I wanted to create a nick/verse of her but decided it would be cooler to make her an Equartrian Dragon
Why??? I need more! GIVE ME MORE!!!! *going on a Flutterhulk rage*
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Don't fret, I'm working on chapter 3 as I speak and watching the old 1985 series for inspiration and the new 2k12 series as well! It'll be a longer chapter with lots of fun!
Good chapter. I wonder how they will react when they find out about the Kraang, Mutants, and the Foot.
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I'll only say this...it'll be a shocker
the BEST TMNT/MLP crossover !!(forgive me I am a bad spiller
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Thank you! Next chapter will be out soon!
most have mooooooaaarr
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I am working hard on the next chapter! I'm almost done It just hard to incorporate mlp into the season 2 episodes
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YAY
When is the next chapter? I'm eagerly waiting for it!
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I really hope soon! I'm writing the next chapter with the episode "Wrath of Tiger Claw" I'm working really hard on it! It'll be great!
5229243 I'm sure it will!
Its just that most TMNT X MLP aren't as good as this one. So I need something to read that isn't the turtles going to equestria or hybrid turtle-ponies.
I'm pretty sure the Turtle-pony thing doesn't exist XD.
P.S You earned a follow for this great piece of writing!
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awww thank you so much! I haven't gotten such nice reviews like yours! I really appreciate you telling me what you think!
5233478 You are an amazing author who has a lot of potential for the future! your fic is amazing and you write even better than me!
Anthro Luna?
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Yes I explained this in the first chapter all ponies are anthros
5325269 How did I miss that?!!!
so i just found this...aaaaaand...i love this!! i hope you update this soon because this is amazing
Just found this here on FiMFic after reading these first three chapters on Fanfic while I was at work. (This site's blocked there, but Fanfic's available...*shrugs*)
I still haven't seen the most recent Turtles incarnation, but this is very good so far. Anthropomorphizing the ponies was a good decision with this setting, and the characters are pretty good so far. Looking forward to reading the rest of what's here so far.
Also....Dinky is a fan of my favorite pair of RPGs apparently! Or at least the music. It was a rather nice surprise to see her suddenly start singing the opening song for Lunar: Silver Star Story Complete.
This really is an awesome story. Well done. This chapter was quite fun, particularly Luna's girls taking Splinter's boys to the bar.
The girls really don't know what they're rushing into....they aren't even tested against a real foe, and they're going after a major opponent.