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Stories are dreams on screen~

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From the lone cave, somewhere far from Equestria, Pinkie is trapped. She sings about her loneliness - how she misses her friends, her loved ones.

But she is saved from far away, by the stallion she loves.

Sequel to Music of Tears.
Next: Tears of Laughter

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

No, I don't despise the idea at all! This was very sweet, and a nice upbeat companion to the other one. Two little things:
1) How'd she get in the cave?
2) I think the word you want is "fateful." It's "that fateful day," as opposed to "that faithful day." Another easy fix.
So yes, keep going!

TRILOGY TRILOGY!! YES YES YES!!:pinkiehappy: p.s Did Cheese die?:twilightoops:

Make that trilogy happen mah man!

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Finally, fixed it! Thanks for pointing it out!
Well, about how she got there... It should be a bit clearer now. Well, she says she doesn't remember it, that she just woke up there.
Actually, there isn't much more I can say about it without spoiling you, so look out for the third part!

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No, cheese is not dead.
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And yes, the trilogy will come soon!

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