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SilverStar7


I'm a go playing brony who reads and writes fan fiction works. That's about all you need to know.

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Twilight returns home to her new castle after the funeral of her dear friend Rarity. Spike has run away in grief. What more could go wrong? But more tragedy strikes! Then still more tragedy!

Basically it is the worst day ever.

Many sad things happen. Everypony cries. Much feels.

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This story is a parody/satire of sadfic works.

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Comments ( 30 )

Much wat. Few feels. I feel lied to. So there was one feel in there. Just... :rainbowhuh:

I will take any punishment that you put upon me, for I laughed at the sheer bucking number of coincidences that happen during this story. AJ would be ashamed of me:ajsleepy:

As someone who is writing a tragedy, I found this really funny!

This was sad. And funny. And then sad again. And funny again. I am now confused. I approve of this fic.:derpytongue2:

Wait am I missing something? Is there like a story before this with Rarity's death? If not you could have at least put a prologue in the beginning like I did with my story "One by One" with the prologue filling the reader on what happened before hand, before the story took place. But just a thought.

Could you put a Flashlight romance in your story?

Pfffttttt.. Hahahahahahaha

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Her cause death was revealed in flashback.

I don't think he was going for anything serious here anyway. Any lack of detail on the deaths jut adds to the absurdity of the whole thing for me.

tfw everypony dies of sad and darkness rules the land for a thousand thousand generations

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Damn it, I laughed at pony death. You turned me into a bad person!

What did I just read...:rainbowlaugh:
Next thing you know, Grogar comes...

Oh my goodness... This was... hilarious... :rainbowlaugh:. Ugh, it was so over-the-top dramatically sad that I was laughing the whole way through... All of the crying especially, and then the deaths sort of speed up and in a matter of a few paragraphs 2 ponies... :collapses with laughter: :dies: :sadness:

three friends.

I lost it. Drinking a shake at work and did a spit take.

Okay, after work I'm gonna finish this.

Pure gold.
:pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

Three friends.

*snorts

Had to finish it. ..

Oh.
My.
God.


This is the best thing I may have ever read.

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This is the funniest story I have ever read!

Where is the Comedy tag?

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Sad and Comedy are conflicting tags, so the story can only have one or the other. When I first wrote this, I read the tag descriptions and felt Sad was better. Following the tag update, I think you are right. The new descriptions make Comedy more appropriate.

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Now I can laugh without the feel of guilt. :rainbowlaugh:

This is as sad as scootaloo not having a mother as disturbing as cupcakes and silent Ponyville in one and as hilarious as pinkie pie herself

Epilogue: When they carried the bodies out, Twilight's will accidentally dropped behind the sofa, so the castle was deeded to Diamond Tiara by default. The rightful heir, Scootaloo, continued to fall asleep night after night in her cardboard box, shivering miserably.

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