A filly can say a lot and surprise all, so why does Shadow surprise everypony by writing something a simple as a poem?
* not sure if it should be a one-shot.
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This story is awsome!
4447545 Thank you
4447578 Anytime!
4447581
He was running
And she was sunning
Paul was singing
As bells were ringing
4447743 Hey, I'm a free verse poet.
And you were one probably knowing it.
Nice story
4447836 I do all sorts of poems. Would you like to hear the most nonsensical one yet?
4447926 Can you please not use language on my page please?
And I appreciate you expressing your opinion.
4447920 Thank you!
4448341 No, but thank you though!
4449978 Very well!
4449978 No problem
Here's a good one I found about Vampires
Come to me, little mortal
I can bring you to heaven's portal
There'll be no sorrow, there'll be no pain
Feelings of joy will fill your brain.
Come to me, sweet human thing
Give me your heart and I'll make it sing
Forget your fears, leave them behind
Forget the troubles of your kind.
Come to me... yes, that's right
Now hold still, it's no good to fight
I'll take your blood, and leave you dying
Didn't you realise I could be lying?
4450038 Here I stand and wonder,
who this life i'm in.
I fight the blood, I fight the vamps.
No one can change me, nor the passion.
I stay still as they appear, and as fast as I see them, they're gone.
I get ready to strike, ready to win.
as fast as they hold me, as fast as they try,
CRACK! The stake goes, in the rise of sun.
Now the horrors are gone, the dreams are once again peaceful.
The vampires are gone, and all can sleep easier.
4450357 Well said,well said
4450360 *bows* thank you
4450366 I give credit where credit is due
And how have you been?
4450373 I'm on this side of the dirt aren't I? that's how I've been.
4450376 I'm not sure what that means sorry
4450381 IT means i'm not dead
4450384 Ahh okay
So how has life been treating you lately?
4450405 Well.... I'll let you think about that.
1. Shutterguy's out of my life
2. NO school
3. I just posted a new story.
MY LIFE IS GREAT!
4450418 Still holding a grudge against Shutters huh.
Well good for you, I wish you all the best.
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4450428 NO, I'm just stating he's gone. And if you wish to continue, I ask that you PM me
4449978 Oh, I apologize for having offended your morals.
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I think poetry should, at the least, not be cliched. It ruins what poetry is supposed to be about. Even worse, there's no rhyme or reason to the poem, so you're not doing anything but putting some mediocre words together in a laughably misguided attempt at powerful conveyance. It doesn't work. Poetry very rarely works unless you have the gift for it.
I just can't get over this. The fic's like framework for a poem and the poem's... not a poem. I wold recommend reading some good poets - Ezra Pound, e.e. cummings, Robert Frost, William Carlos Williams, etc. - before writing anything. And even then, don't expect to be a master of verse.
4451248 Well, not all poetry has to rhyme or make sense. That's why a free verse poem is so easy to write.
4456110
I'm not even sure if there's a word for how heavily I just sighed.
4457964 Well, all I can ask of you now, is f you would like to continue to critisize me, please IM me.
4461746
I'd like to congratulate you, with no sarcasm or hidden agenda, on your maturity and understanding. Well done.
4468012 Well, thank you. I'm actually surprised,I've never got a response like that.