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How far would you go?

Areos didn't really want to be sent to a world with talking ponies, but that's what happened to him. He will make new friends, new enemies, face many hardships, both physical and emotional. Will he make it back? Only one way to find out!

This is a first person story, so I may make a few mistakes, sorry. Also this is my first "Official" story, so please leave feedback that you think could help me improve.

Enjoy the story!

Chapters (2)

Proluge: And so the ride begins · 20th May 2014 · 2,089 words
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Chapter 1: Hospitals and horses · 9th Jun 2014 · 2,280 words
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anon5412

anon5412 #1 · Jun 11th, 2014 · · · Proluge: And so the ride begins ·

Well, that escalated quickly...
This is just my opinion, but I think this story's pacing is to quick. Although I think there are other people who like stories this quick.

Areos

Areos #2 · Jun 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1: Hospitals and horses ·

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Yeah, maybe I should have slowed it down a little bit, now that I look back it did get out of hand a little quickly. Thank you for the feedback, I'll try and slow down the pacing a little, but not too much.