The Doctor, Twilight, and Derpy arrive in the England of the Doctor's universe on Christmas Eve of 2010. What waits for them includes an icy storm, something from Derpy's past, and a reunion with a lost friend.
Private travels to a strange asylum in search of a missing pony. What he finds is a madhouse filled with all sorts of horrors the likes of which he's never seen. But one madpony in a box has...
This story is now the 6th story on this site to feature the 10th Doctor's regeneration. Surprisingly, it was very well written. It's also at least the third to involve Derpy, and probably the second or third shortest one.
Wow that was good. Keeping in mind there's like 5-6 other regeneration stories on this website (me being the author of one of them ) very well written. The length bothered me a tiny bit but that's not really a mark on the story. Overall, very nice
4464733 Thank you for the kind words. I decided that the ending, I would give the speaker some personality. I bred the ending out of my annoyance at the whole "David killing himself because lol Wilfred." Again, thank you for the kind words, sir!
Not a bad story. Thanks for sharing.
This story is now the 6th story on this site to feature the 10th Doctor's regeneration. Surprisingly, it was very well written. It's also at least the third to involve Derpy, and probably the second or third shortest one.
4410724 I used the 10th's regeneration because it was such an amazing scene. It kicked me right in the feels with steel-toed boots.
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And you are now the first person to give a reasonable explanation as to why you used that scene.
Congrats.
4410924 Thank you for the comments, mon ami.
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Parlez-vous francais?
4411953 Oui, un peu.
Wow that was good. Keeping in mind there's like 5-6 other regeneration stories on this website (me being the author of one of them ) very well written. The length bothered me a tiny bit but that's not really a mark on the story. Overall, very nice
4421130 Thank you for the kind words, mon ami!
amazing work you have here. kind of a sad ending, but it felt natural.
4464733 Thank you for the kind words. I decided that the ending, I would give the speaker some personality. I bred the ending out of my annoyance at the whole "David killing himself because lol Wilfred." Again, thank you for the kind words, sir!
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your welcome my fine fellow. it is some good fiction and was an enjoyable read. so, i should be thanking you.
4467775 That's all I can hope for, really, is that someone enjoys the work I put out.
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and it looks like i was able to do that. win-win for both of us.
Marching to the drums. I can already think that it's a master. Chapter. Dumdumdumdum, Dumdumdumdum.
I COULD DO SO MUCH MORE!! SO MUCH MORE!!!
Hey Old Man, rest your head
You're breaking down inside
Armour's cracked, set to collapse
Damn you, don't you cry
...don't cry.