A curse has been brought to the land and now most sentient creatures have been mutated to half dragon hybrids. A thousand years has past and now there remain only a few sane half wyrms left. Those whose minds halve not been lost now travel to a far away land were there is being that beckons all that hear. Halving nothing to lose our hero plunges into the abyss and begins his journey.
Its kind of a cross over with Dark Souls, but not enough to be in the tag.(I think) While the story is told by the point of view of my OC, it mostly revolves around the people he meets.
This is my first MLP story so I hope you enjoy.
Chapters (1)
Honest feedback?
Okay.
Too short. I expected longer but what is there is good enough.
4408322 Well it is a prologue. It's supposed to be a taste of things to come. But I'll honestly try to make the chapters longer. What would you recommend as a good length?
4408675 Of course, if it's only one chapter, a decend amount of words is 2,000. Also I am not saying your work is 'bad' but I am saying your work could be longer. Just so you don't missunderstand.
4408743 Oh no, I understand.
Believe me when I say I've seen some good writers on this site who I wish would make their chapters longer.
4408966 Ah. Alrighty then.